Rainbow Dash has been fantasizing about her idol, Daring Do since she was first introduced to the series. After discovering she was a real pony and helping her, she could only want her more. Daring Do comes to visit and makes those dreams come true.
We JUST figured out what to call a Daring-Rainbow ship, and now this? -throws stack of papers in the air- I'M DONE. No, don't stop me. I'm resigning. This is all your fault. ... Thanks.
....i killed 7 people to read thisis that a bad thing....anyway now we have the darinf dash clop fics storming up...cant wait for flutterbat to come along
I understand this is a clop fic, but the pacing of the pre-clop parts seemed rushed. It lacks foreplay, in the literary sense.
"Come on in, Daring." "Thanks, Dash. Now let's have the sex." They have the sex, suddenly Twilight. "Oh sorry I didn't mean to." "Is okay, let's have the sex." Then the three of them have the sex. The ends.
Maybe I'm just picky, but I felt that the sexy bits came on too quickly, and it made them feel unnatural and even forced. There was hardly any flirting, let alone romance. So the intro bits seemed very rushed and really took me out of the story.
We JUST figured out what to call a Daring-Rainbow ship, and now this? -throws stack of papers in the air- I'M DONE. No, don't stop me. I'm resigning. This is all your fault.
... Thanks.
....i killed 7 people to read thisis that a bad thing....anyway now we have the darinf dash clop fics storming up...cant wait for flutterbat to come along
3763791 Yes it is very bad thing to kill seven people, unless they had it coming anyway.
Daring got a souvenir from Twilight after the fact:
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We need more stories like these
3659618 Daring-Sparkle-Dash, right?
I understand this is a clop fic, but the pacing of the pre-clop parts seemed rushed. It lacks foreplay, in the literary sense.
"Come on in, Daring." "Thanks, Dash. Now let's have the sex." They have the sex, suddenly Twilight. "Oh sorry I didn't mean to." "Is okay, let's have the sex." Then the three of them have the sex. The ends.
Maybe I'm just picky, but I felt that the sexy bits came on too quickly, and it made them feel unnatural and even forced. There was hardly any flirting, let alone romance. So the intro bits seemed very rushed and really took me out of the story.
Clop bits were really well written, though.
Anal , tit play and cum-play...
Man you got it all!!!