the image its from fox in the shadow?

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From Ponibooru! I don't have a source beyond that, sorry. It's really hard to find Twilight-Clone pictures that don't have her and the clone...you know.

Woo Twi²! I assume you're not going to ship it, but I still love her personality dynamics outside of... well, you know what I mean.

For all your shipping clone needs, (And potential future inspiration if you get stuck, God knows I do)

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/9562/Perfect-For-Me

Also, love your writing style. Excited for more :)

It's from a tumblr blog friendlytwilight

holy shit you mixed up coat with skin!

prepare for the butthurt

either way great story *track*

+1 internets for the Fermat allusion

Totally gonna track this, sadly I'm not able to read it now... Let's see if I remind to read it as soon as I get home

>>314513314513

Reading books together?

Also, you've got a couple references to hands in here that should probably be hooves instead.

in tubler appears to be three that i know of

>>314730314730

I'm sure I don't know what you're talking about!

>>314730314730

I'm sure I don't know what you're talking about!

>>315782315782

Hee. Hee. Nope! I uh...I don't see any. Come back in two minutes.

>>319152319152 blarg i cant find where it was but you said something like 'blue skin' at the spa, but they are horses so they have coats. i was more or less pointing it out but oh well

>>320429320429

Well, that can't be right! Because I don't see it now and there's certainly no chance I went back and edited it out later!

>>322392322392 Fucking derp.I was reading other stuff really late at night, so i was really tired and thought it was this. Shit sorry about that.

A little spelling mistake. It's 'pegasi' not 'pegasai'. Other than that, great story! I can't wait for more! Oh! And poor Fluttershy!

"I hurt Twilight! I lashed out in anger! I think I might look good in leather! I am a bad pony!”

I loled. A lot. Same with "make a friend", but with more pun groaning the second I got it :D

This is great.  I'm really looking forward to more of it!

This was a brilliant chapter. Two Twilights are really great. I enjoy this story and the style of writing. I look forward to the next tantalizing chapter

moar plz!

Kthnxbai!  

but seriously, I wanna see Twilight and Sparkle play of the whole 'Good/Evl' dynamic...I think Twilight'd look sexy in leather, and Sparkle'd knock 'em dead in some spandex tights!  

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

Wow. Just this first chapter was so enthralling. The bit with Twilight being mistaken as a vampire was really well-conceived and made sense. Although, I do find Twilight's bad decision making with that spell a little jarring; too stupid for someone like Twilight, imo. And I know a lot of other people do this, but replacing "Ah" for "I" in Applejack's dialogue just bugs the crap out of me. I'll try to read the rest when I get the chance.

The idea of two Twilights didn't sound particularly promising at first. But now I think this is going to be a very interesting relationship. You're just doing so well with the writing and characters. But one thing I don't get: why is mirrored Twilight eager for the spell to be undone? Wouldn't she be afraid what will happen? Didn't she admit that she really wasn't from an alternate mirror dimension? Or did she change her mind when the other ponies warmed up to her?

In this case, the mirror isn't so much "eager" as suffering an identity crisis. In that scene, she was thinking of herself just as "A magical copy" instead of a pony, and of course, summoned things go away when the spell runs out. Now that she's been reminded she's not just a knockoff, but her own pony, she'll be better.

>>357451357451

Ah, okay, makes sense. Thanks for clearing that up.

This is very interesting. Looking forward to more.

Shouldn't Twilight want to be her own pony in some way, rather than just being Twilight Sparkle 2. Other than that it is a very facinating story and concept.

Just letting everyone know -- I am not dead, and will be continuing my story. Life has just taken an unexpected turn.

Save your sympathy though, this is an awesome turn, it just devours all my free time like Parasprites on apples.

"-Of this, I have found a remarkable demonstration which this margin is too narrow to contain."

AHAHAHAHA

I see what you did there

Hey there everypony! Shorter update this time, getting back into the swing of things. Do enjoy!

“Now common. We have organizing to do!

               ^

          Fix me!

Was this deliberate?  

                                          v            

Applejack would have de-scribed  it

                                                        ^

Also double space here.              

Now that I've actually read the whole chapter...

I'm not sure if I like the socially awkward note you ended on. Not that it isnt good, it just looks sorta... painful. Sorta like this: But not really. *looks at story picture* OH! RIGHT! Thats where this is going.

Anyway, that aside, good story. I like where you are going with this idea, and I like this idea to begin with. I cant wait for moar.

HOLY CRAP!  UPDATE!!  TIME TO READ FOR GREAT JUSTICE!

Aaaaaaaaaw.  

Did anyone else think of the song "Try to see it My Way" while reading this?

Yay, this story may be the randomest thing that ever did random, but I did enjoy the first two chapters.

By the way, in the line "When Twilights only response was to groan and roll over" it should be "Twilight's". It was slightly confusing because in this story there really is a possibility of Twilights as well as Twilight's!

LOL akwardness

2x the adorkableness

2x the long and roundabout reasonings

2x the fun

Luna must be very happy

Glad you finally updated. I was worried this story was dead. And, yeah, this was a good chapter. But lots of technical errors that need to be fixed up.

With Celestia as my witness, one day, I will write a ponyfic where the first comment is not pointing out editing errors!

Working on correcting these ASAP.

One proofreading by someone who isn't dyslexic later...hopefully that should address the grammatical problems. Don't know what I'd do without spellcheck.

Die, probably.

Haha! The awkward has been doubled!

>>711090711090

Well, if it makes you feel better, I only point out errors I see in stories I actually like. I wouldn't bother otherwise.

Tempting as it is to think of the EQD proofreaders as the devil, I must remember that it is their job to pick out every single little flaw in your story. They don't enjoy crushing your hopes and dreams.

For those of you who have been kind enough to point out my grammatical mistakes, thank you! The story is getting a very through edit as we speak, and future chapters will get a better review by a proper English major.

Huzzah! The grammar has been doubled!

Spelling and grammar looks fine to me!

And great story too, liking the lack of shipping so far

How often do you update this story?

Expect the next update in about a week!

It has been A WEEK

This could almost be an actual episode, it is adorable! :twilight smile:

Can't wait for more!

Ha ha ha @ Ilikepie.

I know! When the week limit came up I was thinking: "Crud, someone is going to notice I'm late, I just know it-". Thanks for commenting though, always nice to know my writing is appreciated!

Yet another round of grammatical revisions (I will Love and Tolerate Equestria Daily's proofreaders!) held me up, but I am making progress. I'm going to take the 4th of July to write, so expect something soon!

Chapter 4 is off to the editors!

And, there! Wow this one was a long time in coming.

Ha! "spiked" her drink. I get it.

You know, there's a "Mane 6" Character Tag you can use rather than tagging each of them individually. Unless Pinkie Pie never appears in the story (I admit, I'm commenting before reading) in which case you're fine.

As the dragon’s frustrated outburst drew to a close, Twilight’s gaze started to waver.

“-tell mother that she finally got that other daughter she wanted! Then she’ll respect our choices!”

“-will not love us, then they’ll learn to fear us! We may be nice, but we’re pegasi, and not to be crossed!”

“-and when one of us emerged victorious, I would know at last if good or evil is truly stronger-”

“-but before the final blow, she would stop, and run a gentle hoof down my trembling side-”

I think we're talking about Sparkle here, not Twilight."

KAAAAHN!

After what they did and what they were doing, I was kinda hoping that Twilight would put the sad tag onto this story by saying that she couldn't consider them to be friends anymore.

What happens in Ponyville:

"That pony has a secret!"

"Oh Celestia, a secret! It has to be evil or morally wrong!"

"YOU'RE RIGHT! LET'S THROW HER UNDER THE GUILLOTINE!"

"LET'S!"

Partybomb! At least it wasn't loaded into the pary canon, or else Canterlot would be buried under the confetti fallout, and all life in Equestria would be estinquished.

Poor Rainbow was spiked with truth serum.

Fluttershy is a dirty mare.

Twilight and Sparkle..... bum bum bum!

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This...I don't know what to say...UPDATE, DAGGONIT!!!! I WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS!!!

I just found this story, and I can say that it is absolutely amazing. Very few stories I have seen manage to feel like they could be straight out of an episode like these chapters do(Which have a flow between that of FIM and Last Airbender for style). The tangents the characters go off on from Rarities story(we must see more of this) to Fluttershy and her obvious issues(you must write more on this) are wonderful and witty.

However, with this last chapter we have a conundrum. Spike just killed his credibility towards everyone present, and will have a long way to go to make up for it. However, the biggest problem I see would be Twilight ending up being both incredibly hurt, and most likely deathly afraid of Sparkle. After all, as much as they try to forget it Sparkle tried to kill Twilight from either perspective intentionally or not, and it was a truly terrifying moment for Twilight. But now that she, and the others, know what Sparkle really thinks about things, there isn't really any going back from hearing a friend say that they essentially want another one gone, nor will the one on the receiving end of that sentiment cope well with what is from their perspective yet another wish for them to die.

Twilight/Sparkle('s) friends won't abandon either of them, they just aren't like that. But they are going to have a big, sad mess to clean up.

Good luck.

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What's that? It's a bird! It's a plane! No, it's...

...the Sad tag!

“-but before the final blow, she would stop, and run a gentle hoof down my trembling side-”

I suppose that animal hospitals don't pay the bills...

This is awesome! I'm so mad that I came in on such a big cliffhanger too!

Hope more is to come!

We'll...we learn a little bit more about fluttershy now huh?

just so I'm clear sparkle is the original right? I get confused sometimes

That's no cliffhanger! That's a bomb that done been dropped!

This is an interesting story. I look forward to further chapters.

It does sometime become difficult to keep track of which version of Twilight is which, though, what with the second Twilight being given her first name.

>>874761874761 Yes, Sparkle is the original, since the others wanted to show the reflection that she's still Twilight(I think that was the reason)

Best pony just broke best pony's heart.

In lighter news, Twilight/Sparkle/Trixie OT3.

Great chapter, oh Spike you silly Dragon. That's not how to go about spiking drinks with truth potion, didn't you ever read Harry Trotter, you're supposed to put it in the tea.

Sweet Celestia's firey burning flank! Twiight just told Twilight she should Die!

...oh, wow. Oh, wow. This is going to be painful, isn't it?

What a traumatic ending! And a real Mood Whiplash, as the Tv Tropes eggheads say, given how funny the earlier parts of the chapter is.

>>314513314513 The real source is Friendly Twilight, from her crossover with Ask Twilight Sparkle.

OOoohhh DRAMA!

Can't wait for more! :D

Tell me where is that new chapter that you did not promise to be out soon.

Just sent in the third and final EQD swing! On the one hoof, if this passes, more readers! On the other hoof, if this doesn't pass, I may actually start updating regularly instead of doing endless grammar edits.

Fermat's Last Theorem reference is best reference.

I'm not sure if I missed something, but what right does a jakobs ladder have to be arcing electricity in a lab? Tesla Coils on the other hand... Seriously, a children's toy with that much power runnning through it is a bit reckless, to say the least.

Congrats on getting this accepted! Glad I could help.

Offer's still on the table to review future chapters if you want. Do you still want to keep your spot in TTG's queue?

>>933811933811

Congrats, it's on Equestria Daily! Now you just have to keep up that perfect grammar* forever or they'll send you to the moon!

*I, uh, haven't actually checked to see if your grammar is perfect or not.

"Be a Mare!" Made me laugh so hard. And then I sang the portion of the song with your lyrics. And it was awesome. Great story, and I'm looking forward to more!

>>944593944593  Yeah, no kidding right?

" Of course, his notes didn’t say what the spell actually did.  Starswirl was a brilliant wizard, but a less-than-brilliant notetaker."

That sounds like a terrible idea.  It could be a genocide spell for all she knows.

I guess when Sparkle uttered those harsh final words in front of Twilight, she would say..."I forgot I was there." yeaaaaaaaa!

Well, the cat's out of the bag now.  Time to stop walking on eggshells and make some omlettes.

GRATZ ON EQD! LETS CELEBRATE BY GETTING A NEW CHAPTER

I liked the parodied "Be a man" song from Mulan. It just made me smile, smile, smile when I read it

OH. SNAP.

(I liked the Mulan reference, though! That is one of the best Disney songs ever! )

Woah, a little bit of truth potion and BOOM, instant conflict :P

I can't help but feel that Twilight and Sparkle are going to have one hell of a fight after this, and since Twilight has been training and getting fitter...

Well, it's gonna be a great read either way

oh my god all the feels when I read the last few lines

Very nice Fermat reference

I love this story! I haven't read all that many fics where Twilight's magic does something unexpected, but of the ones I've read, this is one of the best!

Think I just want to know all of Fluttershy's speech

MOAR!!! MOAR!!! This story is amazing!

OH. SHIT.

That's all I can say to that cliffhanger. MORE! I NEED MORE!

Also, loving the story.

Oh, I nearly forgot, I loved Rarity writing fanfiction... inside a fanfic, no less. XD

10/10. And that last line was just...

I want to see more insight into the relationship between Sparkle and Twilight; why does Sparkle feel this way? I mean, if there was another me I'd trust me to do what I'd do, so I don't quite understand why having Twilight around would take Sparkle's life away, as she put it. It would also be nice to have another me to just talk to. To have somepony I could relate to and not have to hide anything would be awesome.

I don't usualy read Sad fics but when I do it's double Twilight.

I'k tracking this thing. Great writinga nd story though that last bomb at the end of chapter 4 left me wondering if I am realy going to like the rest of the fic.

Well there is only one way to find out.... BRING ON THE NEXT CHAPTER YOU GODLY CREATURE!!!

>>947281947281 You have someone who's just like you. Who Knows you. Who knows your friends. They are you for all intents and purposes. They do stuff the way you do, they act the way you do, they interact the way you do.

It feels like you've been replaced. People mistake you for your double. Your copy goes off with your friends when you don't. They're replacing you with them. They have your name. They have your face.

And then, you notice how the way they do something is irritating. And they're you. The way they act like they know. The way they say certain words. The silly way they part their hair.

All the while, because you begin to feel off put by them because you know, in the back of your head, that they know that you feel like that because they're you. They're doing it on purpose. They have to be, right? Becasue they're YOU and they know how to bother you.

At the words "the party bomb" I fell off my chair laughing at what i think rarity's face would look like when that was rolled out...

This chapter gets mad props for the Mulan reference

Hooray double Twilight. Just give one of them a goatee and we should be all set. Or maybe farming fit Twilight and running fit Twilight.

Just kidding, your not fat Twilight, your just unfit.

You know at first I thought that this fic would be like that Red Dwarf episode where there are two Rimmer holograms and they start to hate each other.

That is really the problem with see yourself, all the flaws glare at you like an angry pimple.

Also, did Spike just throw Dinky out of a window? Derpy's going to be mad.

I want to know how Fluttershy's speech would've ended had Spike not interrupted.

Or on second thought, I probably don't