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Thanks for the help! I took care of the redundancy.

Clearly I'm in need of an editor...
I think I know what you're saying about the Celestia/AJ thing. It went a little overboard. I think it comes from how much I like AJ and how I'd like to think that someone of Celestia's rank would be moved by the tragedy of AJ's life. [Correction- it's a critical future plot point]
Actually - was it Celestia's reaction to the scene with respect to AJ or was it the therapy and subsequent visits to Sweet Apple Acres? (Or all of it?)
What I was trying to convey was that one of the people closest to AJ's heart said probably one of the cruelest things you could say to her and yet all AJ can think of is Twilight's welfare. After all she's dealt with in her life I feel that's pretty noble of her and worthy of Celestia's esteem.
It's hard getting the characters "voices" right. Much harder than I thought t would be...(hence maybe the "funkiness")

I like Twilights logic in this one. Lol.