A single event opens the eyes of Twilight to something she had, for so long, denied. The depth of the love she discovers will forever change what she values and will lead her on the first steps of a journey that will affect the future of Equestria.
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Yes!! New update!
Commence reading... now!
Finished reading, and I definitely like what you did with the "magical lovemaking" bit. I will not deny, that is something that two people (or even ponies) should feel when doing so - they should feel as if they become one, rising to a climax.
In any case, I am very interested to see the others reacting, and what's going to happen to Applejack when (or even if) she gets her memory back?
Do keep it going; I was waiting quite a bit for this update.
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Thanks!
I meant to respond earlier but I was working on finishing the next chapter. I really appreciate your staying with the story. It isn't happening chapter by chapter, it's pretty much done, and I'd love to tell you what happens now but for now you have to listen to the click click click of the roller coaster pawls as you climb that first hill...
"Wait - the FIRST hill?" I hear you cry.
eYup.
BTW - Have you had a chance to check out the PMV's I made?
Dashie Jet
Pinke Pie - Cajun Girl?
The things that you expressed interest in will all be answered, all I can do is to ask that you trust me and to stay with the story. There are a lot of details in previous chapters that will play largely in the later chapters.
What do you think of my new avatar? I think it's just another gift from the creators of the show letting everyone know that they are Applespark fans. I can make that case so easily.
I have to say I completely freaked out when I saw it. Love that episode.
My dialogue?-
TS: "You know I love you AJ and I know we just got married, but do we have to go out there and thank the citizens?"
AJ: "We sure do sugarcube!"
TS: "Awwwww You know what they'll all be thinking about!"
AJ: "eYup!"
TS: "Uhhhhhgh! Well let's get it over with..."
Tell me that doesn't work!
Back to work Chapter 15!!
I should tell you that I've written a lot of the key scene's for other chapters and I've actually finished other chapters as well. I have not been ignoring this. It probably sounds sad but this is a big part of my life. The ponies keep me sane and happy and I love writing about them.
4350364 No, I think everything you've written is very good, and it's good that they help keep you sane. Hell, they keep me sane too. I've added the PMV's to my watch later list for the morning.
Your story was one of the first I found on here when I joined the site, and I hope to see it to it's finishing point before I leave from where I'm at in July.
That being said, I'll be back around... August-September when I'm done down in Texas. With that, I wish you some damn good luck in finishing up this story, and that Twilight and Applejack get the ending that I think they've both earned!
P.S. - FYI, I am pretty afraid of roller coasters. So... never. Again.
woke up and saw new update! WOOT!
now I read it and you don't disappoint ever do you? Love the "as one" part, sharing so much at once with such intensity, I understand why they cried! Also glad that you made them cry after that, added more feeling to what they did and how much it meant to them!
But yes I would love to see where this goes from here, everyone's reactions, the lack or support of the relationship from the others... we know that some will not be surprised by it at all.
I cant wait to see where your going to go with this! I see you said this was the First Hill? hmmm cant wait indeed...
Im still half asleep or i'm sure I would have more to say but... you get the drift!
P.S. i love your icon and your wedding story works well with it! hmmm I wounder what they all will be thinking about?
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After your and Eclipse's really nice comments I had to go back and re-read it. ( I found so many little things that bugged me about the style etc. that I had to do some re-writing on it.
I do think about you two when I'm writing and hope that I'm not making you wait too long and that you like what's happening.
The two of them are FINALLY going outside! (*yay*) there would be a picture of Fluttershy here if the tablet I use supported the site...
I hope to have the next chapter ready by the end of the week but my plate gets pretty full (stupid job! )
I keep going back and adding things.
Thanks for the encouragement!
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I love the updates but I am fine with waiting, waiting usually means it turns out better
Cant wait to see them up and around.
sounds like your tablet has the same problem my phone does lol
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Yes,
It's about 1/3 done.
Just wanted to say that this will be one of my last comments on your wonderful story, my friend. I say that because... well, I'm not gonna have access to virtually any technology for two months within a few days.
I'm leaving for basic training soon, and I won't be able to get back to the Internet until about Aug. 30 - Sep. 1.
So, with that being said... YOU KEEP WRITING AND POST AS SOON AS THE CHAPTERS ARE DONE.
This will be one of the first stories on my favorites list that I check ASAP. Keep it coming, friend.
Don't stop.