An author of intense Rescue Ranger fanfics trying his hand at MLP:FIM fanfics.Comments and criticisms are much appreciated for any story submissions of mine.
Two brothers lived in Ponyville before the return of Nightmare Moon. They both felt like outcasts in their own town. Everypony would not understand their hobbies or natural inclinations, but they believed in themselves.
This is the story of how Stratum and Steele got their symbols as well as how they use their special talents to save all of Equestria.
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Please sir...can I have some more?
Interesting story,but i would say that the comedy is subtle (like the chase) so slice of life just maybe.
Still a good heartwarming story.
Tracking it now, interesting new concept
Didn't see "Trixie learning magic and impressing Twilight with her raw power " in such a way. ,good luck
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That chapter was not supposed to be added to this story. I have a whole new story called "Gemini in All Things" that contains this new information. you should read that one for the setup for what you read. Sorry for the confusion.
I've been trying to delete these chapters I added in error to no avail.
you can just unpublish it, delete the words and then save it.
Okay, NOW it is completely finished. I finally had some time to finish these further chapters.
I even got to chop up the ending into 4 parts to take up the final chapter headings that I accidentally inserted when I was populating the chapters for "Gemini in All Things".
Thanks for commenting! Any criticisms to fix future stories?
Yeah! Comment on an old story! Very good.