Something made it to the returned Crystal Empire before Shining and Cadence, that something not being at all pleased with its current situation.
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Short chapter, but somehow very 'filling'.
I was sort of expecting Nigel to send Reflection on anger management courses as punishment, and perhaps 'order' Vibrant to carry out her previous intentions as soon as he was out of the room as I could imagine getting interrupted like that would've spoiled the moment.
ps. by filling I meant that it felt long.
Shorter, than I expected. Stil good.
Cheese for the God of cheese!
3625628 Good stories always seem too short
3625885 Diaries of a Madman is pretty good.
I get the feeling we'll be getting an Equestrian viewpoint, soon.
Celestia might be confused and worried, for obvious reasons.
Luna might feel admiration for his "removal" of Sombra and the "taming" of the changelings -- maybe affection, too, much to Celestia and Cadence's irritation. (Reflection and Luna shadow war over Nigel, go!).
Cadence is biased, for obvious reasons, and this might spread to Twilight, who might become as confused as heck (along with the other Elements) after she finally meets him.
After Nigel begins to get the Empire up to scratch economically and infrastructure-wise (he already seems to be earning their loyalty and respect), I could see him setting up a limited trade deal with Equestria.
"Hey, if every Crystal Pony pitches in some spare junk from their house, like an unused crystal glasses or goblets or whatever, we can use them to barter for supplies from the other states."
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I could almost see Nigel making that request, almost. I think he'd try to barter with cheese products first.
Other than that you raise an interesting question. How DID the Crystal Empire and Ponies adapt to the new world? I mean they're a thousand years displaced from what they know, complete with outdated laws, ancient customs long abandoned by the others, I assume, and an old dialect. Well not the last but they should have had that! They vanished around the same time Luna was banished!
I think that I enjoy this version even more than the other one. Very interesting stuff.
Good chapter.
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Cheese for the Cheese Throne!
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CHEESE FOR THE CHEESE GOD!
CRACKERS FOR THE CRACKER THRONE!
3625925 at least, please link the author when mention a story.
( its irritating as #¤%& to search, when you could already starting to read the story. )
3629933 Let the whole world Burn (From fondue)
3632321 Longest story on the site.
Just search for word count.
...The Author and Punctuation must not get along.
3629933 ...Chocolate for Sombra?
3632321 Here you go, one madman coming right up :)
3679840 yay sheogorath
I have a feeling she meant more than cheesecake when she said he could sample them...
I'm not sure what to say about Nigel's obsession with da' cheese. But it's fun.
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Yeah, I was expecting something along the lines of "Well that wasn't blatent!" from him.
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I like how he's still strutting around in his freaking boxers!
Is this where the name for your other fic
comes from?
Uh oh, I think Reflection's got a crush
The second line is when I thought Nigel was going to have a stalker.
The third made me laugh because of his reaction.
The fourth was the line that broke the dam... I think my neighbors heard me laughing.
Jealousy. So Reflection has already a little crush on him? Didn't expect that one, I mean she was scared out of her mind maybe an hour ago, since she thought he might punish her. I still find it interesting and am thrilled to see where this will go.
ooooooh somepony/changeling has a crush on the emperor!!!
I don't know... That sounded a bit too much like an innuendo for me.
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Statement: It probably was.
I'm probably. . . 1 2 3. . . 6 years late but, boy I sure do love me cheesecake.