The Dark Brotherhood has fallen by the hands of the newly atoned Dragonborn and the responsibility of establishing a new sanctuary falls to Shadowmere. However, a horse, holds little charismatic charm among the people of Nirn and, thus, must look for alternative means of recruitment. By Sithis's command, Shadowmere traverses the plains of reality into Equestria.
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It's a start. Won't really be able to judge anymore without seeing where this goes.
Meh. It's not bad... but it could use some work and I like the idea, so all you really need is an editor.
OH MY GAWD I HAD THIS IDEA! I WANT MOOOOAR!!!
level 76 legit :3
My only tip so far is to not have things like sighs described like this: *sigh* it would be far better to add on to that with something like. With a deep sigh, etc. Other than that it was well written.
Level 1 on December 2011 by October 2013 became 81. i played the shit out of the game and deafted the ebony Knight.
Please keep updating daily if possible
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Hey, good idea. When I wrote it I felt it made things become a bit disconnected, but couldn't think of an alternative. I will address it.
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I'm working on some more chapters but I have school and other activities to attend to so weekly updates seem to be more likely.
Eh, it kind of falls into the common trap of Sithis being a murderous death god; the "Sithis" of the DB is generally accepted to be Mephala trolling.
is this story dead? I really want more please!