Ever since his reformation Discord must find more tame means to fight off boredom, as well as learn how to embrace a peaceful lifestyle if he is to remain within Equestrian society.
He finds the perfect (yet chaotic solution) in becoming a parent...
Everypony isn't sure Discord is cut out for the job, as he can barely keep himself under control.
His chaotic impulses are only becoming more and more unstable, thus, drama is ensured.
Will the "magic" of friendship and parenthood be enough to keep dear Discord sane?
Chapters (5)
This is my first story on this site and I plan to stay with it a while.
Yes, the concept is a bit weird, but I wanted to write something I couldn't just read here.
It's hard to find an original concept anymore, now that the fandom is so big.
I will do my best to update often and I appreciate any constructive criticism, as its been a while since I have written something that isn't school related.
Side note: the pictures at the ends are awesome.
and cue screwball! because yea... that's discords daughter... and you wouldn't leave her out and forget about her like everyone else right... right?
2715724 Thanks! Forcing myself to draw a picture for each chapter will help me improve my skills, as well as give me some motivation.
2715874 Don't worry, I have plans for Screwball. I'm think she will either be one of Discord's servants from when he ruled Equestia or his adopted daughter.
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I stumbled across a few typos, and in the hopes of not beating a pony which is too old, the first chapter is important for making the first impression even as you continue updating it.
Either change to peaking its way, or remove "its was" completely. I recommend the latter.
I'd add another and after slowly, but then the sentence does sound a bit clunky. Maybe re-word it?
I think that was it.
Oh and I forgot to say in my other comment earlier, this premise is interesting and I haven't seen it before. I'm looking forward to seeing more, to see where this goes.
3173702 Oh, thank you so much! I do reread my work several times but I never managed to catch them until someone points it out. Just the other day I had to replace "taught" several times because I used it as "thought."
Also, I misspelled "Oh" as "Ok" just now and I almost submitted the comment before catching it.
I'm going to have to find an editor eventually.