Pfft, are you shitting me? An hour is OH NO DOOOOM!?

I wake up, get breakfast, shower and all that in half, before driving another half to work mon/fri. Weeeeeeeak.

Bahahaha. I approve.

Dude, this 2nd person fiction is properly awesome! I loved the little link with Healing Dash ^_^ Can't wait to read the rest of them bro, you've got talent!

this is awsome, i was confused as to why it had no ratings until the 5th chapter but its good

WHAT! NOOOO ive caught up :\ BUT DUDE, THIS IS AWESOME, <3 pinkie soooooo much. just, amazing. U get a watch and a 5 man KEEP IT UP! :D this is one way to brighten my day

SWEET MOTHER OF JEFFERSON DAVIS.

This fiction is incredible. I don't think there could be a better combination of bad-assery such as Paintball combined with romanticism: you pulled this off flawlessely. I tip my hat, and all of my five stars, to you, my good man.

Woah. Me jelly.

Oh god...gummy, the erotic author.......half of me thinks your sick and the other half things your the best writer in this fandom....

God......you are a true writer.....and your also 5.00 grams of pure pinkie pie! Keep it up but please...little less sause please.

Gummy FTW!

For my first reaction? "Darn, stories got posted while I was asleep, other people got to read them first." My second reaction? "Well, the quality is still there, so, lets enjoy these anyway." Quite good, by this point I am almost an internet stalker on your page, waiting cheerfully for the next update. I feel that I will enjoy all of these stories as long as you keep posting them.

In the immortal words of the most revered Tucker.

"Bow chicka bow wow!"

Seriously though, cute story and it managed all that it did without going into xxx-land.

*Faved*

And I though healing Dash was sweet, this is pinkie high

Plz Write a story where gummy writes a erotic novel that Twilight finds and reads before discovering Gummy wrote it. XD

Metal gear solid reference in the story? you made this story so much better awesome work

>>1279712797

>>1280112801

Whee!

>>1280312803

Many more crossovers in my fic involving past work. It's like a web now, with all the little references to past, present, and even future works.

>>1281212812

Thankies. ^.^

>>1283312833

Much more to come, trust me.

>>1284912849

FRIENDSHIP.

FLAWLESS VICTORY.

>>1285412854

Heh, thanks. It took quite a while to write it, but was worth it.

>>1290112901

>>1291012910

I'll try. :P

>>1301113011

Stories and more stories to come, each one better than the last. ^.^

>>1340813408

Speaking of which, Swing (My female-perspective Applejack fic) has a pretty hot and heavy optional part (written by Coffeebean himself). I feel like if someone wants to read it or stuff like that, I should make it optional. That's why there will be a link in the description to a gdoc should I do anything like that. Just thought I'd let you all know.

>>1342413424

The story was sweet, both figuratively and literally. :P

>>1374613746

That will definitely be a little weird, but I might as well throw it onto the pile. It won't come right away, though. I've got enough to write already. >.>;

>>1376413764

Eeyup. I thought it was totally random at first, but then I realized I was writing about Pinkie Pie and went with it.

Thanks for the fun read, very adorable.

I definitely need to say, that i love they way you are crossing over your own Stories!

Somehow .. every story gets more cute by this .. and i hope (i havent read the other story's, yet) that you will continue this with your stories!

So .. very .. much .. approve!!

The Gamer's Twitch: A powerful technique involving the rhythmic contraction of muscles in any of the extremities. Used mainly to press buttons so fast, Mario Party CPUs would be afraid.

Oh yeah. I gave it a name.

Gummy is the best pony, even if he's an alligator.

...we need a one-shot GummyXReader fic!

>>1279712797

come one hes trying his best

wouldn't you go buserk if you were abouut to be late for date with someone you liked alot

>>1279712797

come one hes trying his best

wouldn't you go buserk if you were abouut to be late for date with someone you liked alot

wait i clicked once???????

Gummy(aka agentG) the aligator that will surprise you

WOW Gummy your talented wrighter

even thought it was erotic wrighting

I so approve of this

now make one with applejack x3

you sould make a epiloge

This is literally the best fic ever.

I'm reading this as part of the Second Person Shipping Collection #6, and this is The. Best. Possible. Thing.

I must really like her if I'm freaking out about an hour! XD

Pinkie Pie...

Huh?! Wazzat?! N-no, I wasn't doing anything! See?!

Wow... I... That.... *Tugs at collar* Is it hot in here, or is it just me? Justmeokaythanksgottagobye! *Blitzs for the door and cool air*

And now readers have a craving for candy and everything kinky... Proud of yourself? XD

>>5505455054

Much so. ^.^

I read both this and your CMC 2nd person. I had no idea it was the same person at the time. But I must say, I now have the urge to devour anything you write. I shall begin the conquest at noon tomorrow, and I shall end it victory!

Lol i totally read these out of order - reading love triangle then dash then applejack then rarity then this... but DAMN i never would  have thought that a pinkie pie romance woulda worked...

I love all the 2nd person view stories

You nailed it right in the center target...

Licorice.... Now that is  certainly.... Well more creative than what I would have come up with, I was actually thinking lollipops would make a good substitute, since well, they are flat and all... Oh, and they have a handle to do some even more Kinky stuff.

Anything more like this?

Holy snap! This was very entertaining.

The whole paintball date? And then Kinky Pie? That was the most entertaining read in a long time. :D

BRAVO!

>>9635796357

Not all lolipops are flat...

That isn't a bad thing, of course.

ugh after this story i've got a fetish for paintball and chocolate!

“I think I have some cherries at my house.”

Pinkie turns to you. “And I know a shop that sells fresh whipped cream.”

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Me gusta.

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AWWW YEAAAHH

Liquid Gummy: Ninja Master

umm wow candy will never be the same for me again in a good way

Ghillie suit date. sounds kinky

>>2067220672 it all makes sense now! i get that when im "in the zone".

also, i love the metal gear references here hahahaha

gummy is a bad flank haha

“Woop woop woop woop woop!” she cries as she runs away.

pinkie zoidburg?!?! woop woop woop

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>>316283316283

Close, three stooges.

Hrm, I could have sworn that I commented on this. Oh well, I'll do it now! Hilarious and yummy read, well done.

I noticed your Fluttershy fic on the new uploads bit, and decided to read through them all starting with the Dash one.

So far, you've made references to 3 episodes before they were even released.

Are you a wizard?

>>354248354248

Nope, I just like to reference work that I have planned so people think I'm a wizard.

I wish it was longer, but once again you have made me one happy pony!

Gummy just gained all of my respect.

Gentleman Creeper, You perfect bastard, you!

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YOU SPIN ME RIGHT AROUND BABY RIGHT AROUND, LIKE A RECORD PLAYER

P.S. Vinyl is best pony

Why do I suck at literature and the Arts?!? WHYY!!!!!! EVERYONE ELSE'S STORIES ARE ALWAYS EPIC! WHYYYYYYYYYYYY!!! WHY AM I SUCH A LOSER WHEN IT COMES TO LITERATURE! I AM THE WORST.

>>287963287963 HELL YEAH!!!

>>1290112901

>>445644445644 INDUBADABLY HE TOOK MINE WITH A SHOCKING AMOUNT OF FORCE WHEN HE WROTE THAT CLOP!

AWESOME!!!!

This is the future and it does work.

That was awesome!

I like how you hint at some of your other stories. Pretty creative.

I'm not really into bondage, but you know, still awesome.

"do you think love can bloom even on the battlefield?"

how many metal gea references are in this story?

0.0

this story took a very akward turn.

i laughed at this, its so..so...cute?

Absolutely fantastic!! The pacing was perfect and the story itself was so adorable. When I found out the date was actually paintball contest I thought "Oh jeez" but you executed so incredibly I don't think it could have gone any better. Amazing character writing as well. When other people try to write Pinkie they tend to get away with alot of LolSoRandumbXD without actually character building Pinkie's personality, but you wrote her so sweet, i daawwed to death when they confessed their love. Just brilliant, and I loved all the references.

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Well that was spicy

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That is all I have to say. Oh and this too...

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>>2785427854 i know the feeling bro

>>651085651085 man poor dude... he even deleted his accounts i would have tried his story too man i sorta feel bad

>>15367141536714 lawl

>>356805356805 you say that like you aren`t...

Wonderfully written. I gotta read 2nd person fics more.

The Metal Gear references were awesome.