Woke up confused, lost, and bearly a memory. This is a story about the journey an ex-human goes on to find love, happiness, and friendship. But no road is easy and there is always that looming shadow over head. Will he make it or fail? Lets find out.
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5700134 Because your hatred is more generic than the type of story itself...meh...why do i even care why you dislike it?
I see some common mistakes in using words like: there, they're, you're, your, there, their, quiet and quite...etc...
Personally, I'm perfectly fine with Alicorn OCs. I honestly think the stigma against Alicorn OCs is unfounded; there are quite a few stories I like that have them. No, what I didn't like about this story was the OC's personality. It was one of the most infuriating personalities that I've ever read. This self-deprecating, self-sacrificing, self-loathing individual is such a complete and total loser; a pushover!
"I don't want to be a burden." "I'm so useless and dangerous." "Your safety is more important than mine. I would die to keep my friends safe." Give me a break! He's known them for two days! He freely admits that he's been trying to distance and avoid becoming close to them so it'll be less painful when he goes home, then he's willing to sacrifice his life because they're his 'friends'! What! 'Oh man, I have multiple broken ribs and heavy bleeding, but Twilight has some splinters, better take her to the hospital first!' Are you kidding me? This guy is a joke!
He states multiple times how useless he is because he can barely walk, let alone do any magic or flying, yet keeps stating how 'dangerous' he is. 'I don't want you to become close to me, I'm dangerous and might hurt you.' AHHH, I'm cringing! And then Celestia decides to put him under lock and key because he can use fire magic? WHAT? That's really the case here, too! She freely let an Alicorn stay in Ponyville, but upon discovering that he can use fire magic and breathe fire, OH HEAVENS NO, HE'S TOO DANGEROUS. Because it's not like anyone else can use fire magic, or breathe fire(COUGH, SPIKE, COUGH)! On top of that, he just fucking saved her nation by helping defeat a powerful villain and gets this punishment anyways, what the fuck!
Look, I really gave this fic a chance. I truly thought I would like this fic because I usually do like Alicorn OC fics if they're written well, but this character is just SO awful.
5700989 I can. If you read more than the first three pages of chapter one, and make assumptions from the tags, then you may see that the story is actually written very well. Not every line is gold, but it's compelling more often than not. He actually does dark very well, his characters are spot on, and the way he paints the world is very interesting, despite some elements being deemed 'generic'. Everything's a remix these days.
5702320 While I somewhat disagree with your opinion on it, I can sort of see your point. When I first started this, it was a way for me to clear my head and not internalize everything that was going on in my life. The early chapters were something that I mainly did for myself. And after I while I mentioned it to a friend and felt comfortable enough to show him. He gave me a lot of confidence to do something more with it, and to show it to another friend, and another, and they gave me enough to post it for more people to see. I'm sorry you don't enjoy it, but I hope you give it another chance later on, when the story is a little more developed.
Curses. All of this talk of sending ponies to the moon and not a single mention of bananas.
What?
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Blame my dyslexia on this it was suppose to be "My verdict is, I find you not a threat to Equestria"
I was right!
I was absolutely right!
Now, if he is called a Draconicorn, that will be amazing.