Discord doesn't like kids. Or parties. But people don't really like Discord, So, to help relations among citizens, Fluttershy throws him a 'DISCORD PARTY!' What could go wrong? Or right?
A teen that needs to get some ideas out of his head.
Discord doesn't like kids. Or parties. But people don't really like Discord, So, to help relations among citizens, Fluttershy throws him a 'DISCORD PARTY!' What could go wrong? Or right?
Reads title.
DIS GON B GUD.
3559156 Haha. Thanks. Hope you liked it!
3559159
Yup, I did.
3559207 Hooray!
Yay
Write more please :3
3559347 I'm actually writing something right now.
In my face? How about in your face for making me want more of this story
3559439 You can't believe how happy you guys make me! SO AWESOME!
So who's the little filly? We never heard it.
3560115 Who did you see her as?
3560126
Varies. All we've got is she's an orphan who's never met Discord before.
Part of me wants to say Scootaloo, but the tag says OC.
3560142 I really didn't want to give any names, I think it helps the fact that discord doesn't even know her , and that she is just some random kid. Except she is not like any other kid, because she is not afraid of him.
3560152
If you gave her a name, it could become a rather interesting longer story, especially if Discord found he enjoyed making her smile so much he decided to adopt her...only to find out being a father is more than putting smiles on a kid's face, and his struggles with fatherhood help him bond with other ponies.
3560169 Not to be rude... But I feel like you're asking for a sequel...
3560181
Not asking. Suggesting.
3560216 Considered.
Thanks for the feedback though! It helps.
3560223
Welcome.
3560227 Hope you liked it anyways!
3560229
I did. I like the idea of kids seeing more clearly than grown ups.
Mental image of Discord trying to prove himself wanting to bond with everyone by watching the CMC for a few days.
I like it. However, a few grammar mistakes that could be easily fixed by a through proofread by yourself. Also, perhaps a sequel and a continuation of this story and who the filly is? I like your style, look forward to seeing more from ya.
3562467 Yeah, I might want to do that
as for a sequel, I'm sort-of on the fence about that
But i'm glad you liked it!
That was cute
3573998 Glad you liked!
3576630 I hope u do another story
35766569 mind the late repy, but I plan on doing something relating to this story since quite alot iof people seemed to enjoy it....
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