• Member Since 26th Nov, 2012
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NeverEatTheLemonsAlone


I enjoy long walks on the beach, dressing up for a formal occasion, and descending into the depths of technicolor horsey madness.

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This story is a sequel to Stoking The Flames


The end of the Great War is nigh. For countless years, ponies have battled each other, gradually whittling down Equestria's population. Very few remain, and among them is only one of the original Bearers of Harmony. But in the last battle, Rainbow Dash will experience what it means to truly go down in history, and the price you must pay.

This is my first one-shot. Please don't judge it too harshly!

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Comments ( 7 )

Seriously, i hope Lyra takes command over the unicorns after this event. She seems to at last have a tiny scrap of decency left in her.

Dang. Rainbow really went out with a bang, didnt she? I mean she VAPORIZED Trixie. Then again she should have known better than to kill Scootaloo, the only loved one Rainbow had left.

I give this story.... 4 out of 5 Moustaches^^ :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

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Thanks for the feedback!
Tell me, how would you feel about a prequel to this? Not a one-shot, but a proper story about how the war started and etc.?

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I would! Just no unnecessary shipping is all I can say.

A good story, it would be nice to have a backstop though. I am guessing Trixie's army was a cult of personality.

Uh, I found this story while browsing but saw that it was a sequel... So I'll read the prequel first right? But it's hidden by a view password? What's that? never seen that feature before

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Oh, sorry about that. I had (and have) a longer, multi-chapter prequel planned for this story, but I've been busy with other projects, so it's kinda there in stasis.

Great short story, I WOULD like to know more! ;)

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