After Hearts and Hooves day, Spike decides to consult Twilight's friends about finding her a stallion. They sort of succeed, sort of...
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kirbyzilla
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Hm..
I'mma give it a 5. Good prospect, but it felt rushed. Take your time! The story, with a bit of a revamp, could be a very good one.
Hmmm. Interesting. It is a wall of text, but a rare one. With "teeth", like middle-aged castle walls.
You know, Stalin was facionated by description and summary. Way to go!
Stalin is facionated by the story. Good puns, pioneer! Stalin gives you thumb up.
Stalin commands to dance!
Very nice story.
Only I do have to say one thing.
"Pegasus named Ditzy"
Her name is Derpy.
This fact was confirmed in a recent episode. Kinda ruined it for me. 
I liked this story, but it was a bit...forced. For one, I dont think ponies even have computers, since they dont have electricity and all.
The plot and humour was decent and the grammer was good, but i did see a few spelling mistakes.
Good try, and I will favourite and like it to support you.
308998
Does that still count now that it's been retconned out?
309056
Err...careful with word-choice.
Technically, they never RE-NAMED her....so "Derpy" is still technically official.
Complete?
Oh well, it your choice to do a one-shot.But this could be a good multi-part.
Very good anyway.
309075 Who cares. Some call her D.... Hooves and others, like me, call her still Ditzy Doo. Why? Because the name is beautiful and sounds good. Even in storys i never read D. Hooves. For me, the name of the gray pegasus with the blond mane and this beautiful golden eyes, mother of Dinky and Sparkles, will be now and forever, Ditzy Doo.
308998
Not only did the retroactively remove the name Derpy, but Ditzy Doo was her name in the script before the writer was specifically asked to change it to Derpy in the first place. I suspect you already know that, though. I'm not anti-Derpy (in fact, I think she's aderpable as can be), but those are simply the facts as they stand. Ditzy is canon, Derpy is fanon, and both are entirely correct depending on context.
309004 Yeah, i kinda feel the same way about it being a bit forced, maybe i'll redo some parts sometime. with the computers though, id like to say that they kind of just invented them. like, i did say they looked a bit primitive, so i thought it was kind of assumed.
309265
Whatever works with you, fine sir. I prefer Derpy, but everyone has their own taste.
308998 i prefer derpy as well, and i would have used it in this one, but it really didn't flow, if you know what i mean