Hazel Eyes, a pony in duty of Canterlot Castle's royalty, has lived a very long life. Being immortal is a blessing as well as a curse. Nopony knows that better than him. And so it was decided that he is to find out about something worthwhile, outside of Canterlot. But there are secrets that nopony should ever know of and some foes that he thought he had left behind long ago are uncomfortably lively.
Expect a deep philosophical sight of the dark side of immortality, a not too gooey romance and the highest quality acrobatic martial arts in the later parts.
Rated T for teen because of some more mature content, no graphic description but you won't have any problems with understanding what's going on. Alternate tags: [Action], [Martial Arts], [Horror]
Proofread by Cubidyow
Cover art by a very talented friend of mine, check her out, she's doing awesome artworksVoidBreathe
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Thank you for your praise, I'm always looking to entertain you guys
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PN me on the major mistakes and I will correct them, as I'm still struggling with some phrases
That is because I'm not a natural English speaker, I'm from Germany.
Awesome, but i have one suggestion: replace the bucks with fucks or get rid of buck entirely.
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the more I think about it, the more I think you're right. I'll find a way to express vulgarities in a better way, thanks. That's what I call constructive criticism 
You're the second one who suggests to quit using buck as a censorship
I just thought, "i will read the first chapter and i will come back to it" and now nine chapters later, I should really be doing some work and yet i am just wondering how regular updates are
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sorry
Can't really tell, the last two weeks I was on vacations, but from Monday on, school's going n and there's a ridiculous amount of exams coming towards me, so updates will be coming very delayed
when does this take place
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The prologue takes place shortly before Luna becomes Nightmare Moon. From the first chapter on, it goes along with the main story of mlp:fim. I just forgot to add this in the prologue
why is this strory in the followers of discord group in shipping ??
discord isnt even in the fanfiction
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I know, and I was not the one who posted it there. When I noticed it had been posted in this group, I couldn't find it, however. Thank you, now I know where to find it, it will be removed instantly
Let me say this: 'Bite Applejack, Hazel." Make her a vampire!!!! I could see it happening...........
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That's all I say
3896009 Are you saying she does become a vampire?
You did, didn't you!
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You just gotta wait for updates like everyone else, except for my proofreader, he gets it immediately.
Now that's what you said
Spike suuuuuuccccckkkkkssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Regarding the show, you're right, but he's got a whole shitload of potential, stay tuned, maybe you'll like what I'm planning to do with him
Primary lotus :D
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, finally someone gets the reference 
Yay
Geman is a really cool language, but its so hard to read :p When i went to Germany this summer i was able to pick up small things and even able to hold tiny conversations. My host family thought i did pretty good and then asked me to try reading one of their books, which i was able to read but understanding is a completely differant story XD
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I have to admit, I imagine German to be one of the shittiest language to be learned, with all the exceptions, different forms of declination, adverbs and other things, but it's so diversified, that, one of my teachers told me, even Shakespeare was envious
This is a pretty awesome story, want to see how my favorite pony goes up against a vampire! :D Although ven i will admit she went a bit far XD
Things are starting to get interesting.
looks and sees "Complete" wait that's it ?
ok i guess that means a sequel 
but how could you end it like this
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And believe me, that's the most generous thing I could do, seeing how things develop in the future
Because I did
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oh ok i can live with that
Thank you, Gigamix. It looked liked German but I wasn't sure. Thank you for clarifying that.
Wow that was an interesting ending. I can't wait to read the sequel.
Ball of pink fur made its home at the hospital?
My Fluffle Puff senses are tingling
I am lost here, any one what to tell me what Hazel did to filthy Rich it never says here.
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Pssssssst, that, alongside others, is something I put into one big confession Hazel commits to Applejack in a later chapter. Again, patience is the key to everything
I like this "law"
Hmmm, das ganze erinnert mich an eine Mischung aus Batman und Vampire Diaris und an Crocodile Dundee...
und dann wieder englisch wo ich keine gefunden hab? Und jetzt mal ernsthaft, wie kann man Ponysex schreiben? Auserdem hatten manche Stellen so was klischeehaftes.
Wieso musste Fleur sterben
Ich hab sie und Fancy immer so geshippt.
Und wieso schreibst du mal deutsch ,wobei du Rechtschreibfehler hast
Ich mags trozdem.
4509904 Um, kay, thanks, I guess. Now I understand Batman and Vampire Diaries, but why Mick? Hazel and Amaimon are speaking German from time to time because it was the common language of the demons. Fleur had to die because Dracula was sacrificed a fair maiden too. When you write a story like this, there are some stereotypes you just can't avoid, I'm sorry. And where did you find spelling errors? I thought my German to be flawless
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Also Mick wegen dem "Sorry but the lady is not amused" am Anfang.
Genau das Gleiche hat Mick zu seinem Kumpel gesagt der die Frau anbaggern wollte. Und irgendwie erinnert mich das halt an Mick.Das Andere muss ich überlesen haben. Ich bin nicht die Beste wenn es um Englisch geht.Und" tieste" ist ein Wort , dass ich nicht kenne.
Oh und GARY SUE.
Translation: Who wanted to inflict suffering you other, with selfishness and revenge didst pain, should be granted a dishonorable death! You'll bring those death itself about you! Tomorrow is sealed your fate! He who sows the wind shall reap the whirlwind! This is the end!
5025592 Not quite, but close. Syntax is a little off, try again
It is as simple as that
Awesome so far