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Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara go one the best adventure ever in the history of adventuring!

(cover by MysteriousKaos on Deviantart)

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 31 )

3534063 Hahaha! Glad someone liked it! I was expecting the worst, since this was pretty much the first complete story I've written when I've just written down every random thing that pops into my head for these two to get into! :rainbowlaugh:

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I'll be honest, this story looks an awful lot like my creative process. Of course, my notes tend to have a lot more profanity, and make a little less sense. But yeah, I definitely got a good laugh out of it :derpytongue2:

This made me snicker. Pretty good story there :raritywink:

This story is still better than most drafts I've had to edit.

3534210 You flatter me! Yes, I actually wrote it to be run-on and bad for a purpose-- NONE! Actually, well... hm... *runs back to story to add bonus chapter* :rainbowlaugh:

I totally read this in the FiW Silver Spoon voice. Much good doge! So wow! :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Loeden deleted Nov 25th, 2013

So fabulous gorgeous bad I loved it. I don't buy the second chapter though. This was obviously written by Scootaloo, not Silver.

So Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon wet deep

went.

Silver Spoon was protecting her one true love shining sun everlasting goddess of perfection some other cheesy line best friend.

Best line EVER!:pinkiecrazy:

There is nothing about this I didn't not not like.. I mean it was awesome:rainbowkiss:

This reads like Bill and Ted's Bogus Journey:derpyderp1:

There are no words to describe what I just read.

That was hilarious, best I've read in a while :rainbowlaugh:

i didn't catch that bit about her sister running away. My Silver "Serving" Spoon had her sister runaway from home too. She changed her name and became a first chair cellist in Canterlot..

I'm sure you can guess who Big Sister is?:duck:

I must be mistaking this fic for another. I could of sworn it has an amazing epilogue with Scoots and lava shark fighting in heaven or something.

Awesome fic even if it took me weeks to finally reply to it :P

3828870 :rainbowlaugh: Yeah, I decided I'd rewrite the epilogue a bit. It didn't really come out the way I wanted. But it'll be back. :yay:

Glad you like it! :pinkiehappy:

3828870 yeah, I'm not going to put the epilogue back. I've kind of gotten to the point in my writing days that I just can't do random atuff. I've tried time and time again, but I just can't do it. Perhaps I'm trying too hard?

But I'm just going to leave this story alone. It's good as it is, without the epilogue.

3867842 There are many writers out there with big, serious, multichapter epics.

And among the list of top-notch drama and adventure stories... there is always that "just for fun no regret" title they do for the giggles. A fire and forget.

This story was that fire and forget. I got a random urge to come back and read it over again one day after watching some Sherclop Pones Silver Spoon in Camp Energy (Limbo playthrough) and came to partake in some good randomness.

To say the least, I was a bit confused. I thought I was at the wrong story. I'm a bit let down that you would second guess yourself or whatever think for some crazy reason that a random and comedic journey like this would require any censorship. The ending in the original made me explode into laughter and do a good double take.

It's okay that it'll never come back, but don't ever think you're above being able to express yourself in random comedy. For what its worth, regardless what you may think, I liked your story. If you wanted serious, this story would never have existed in the first place.

But if you don't believe me feel free to check out some of the most popular fimfic authors and I guarantee you they all have at least that one or more silly stories they did because they just wanted to.

That is all. Don't beat yourself up over such things. Not every story is meant to be a Phamtom of the Opera.

Well, I'm sleep deprived as is, good night!

This is a trollfic. isn't it?

4063623 totally not! Diamond Toara is a verry sirious xharactr 2 me and i was totes being so serus. Dnt juje.

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I could have been banned from the rage review place because we are not allowed to post reviews for fics that obviously are messed up on purpose.

4069381 oh. Okay. I didn't know. If I did, I wouldn't have requested.

Feel free to review any of my other stories though. I'm sorry about this.

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Its ok, I took it down before anything could happen for me...I think.

Time to go set Google on fire. :pinkiecrazy:

That was trippy stuff.

4196917 And the current version is the edited version. The first version was even TRIPPIER.

aaaaaaaaand...? xDDD the crossed out words are..eeh...funny? i like this story xD it..epic! <XD anyways c:
can i finish this to a clopfic? JUST KIDDING! or maybe i'm not..whatever

Wut... I think lost cell brains much:pinkiecrazy:

If it weren't for the last part, I would have thought the gag would be that Diamond Tiara is writing fanfiction about herself and her girlfriend...otherwise, I'm sorry, but it looks like it came directly out of a grade-schooler's notebook, in an unintentional sense.

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