If you strike me down, I will become harder than you could possibly imagine.
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@Master Jedi...
It was "not bad", but the ending was more a hindrance than a laugh, I think. I might suggest changing it to something else lightly comedic, especially if you are leaving the door open to follow-up.
Uh, who is this new pony? But this story is awesom, make more! The outer chaos, and me command you! You will please us!
If that's okay I mean
Add. More.