Im really enjoying this, i cant wait to see what happens next. i hope we kick the shit out of that guard but still please post more soon!

p.s. not to crazy about the cover art though

good start but stop spelling pony with a zero.

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The 0's were there for a reason, dude. 4chan used to have a spam filter that wouldn't allow stories to be posted if they had the word "pony" in them. I just didn't feel like changing them, to be honest. The next part was actually cut out from this, so it'll have zeros in it as well, but no more after that.

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Thanks, man. The drawing was actually just a rough sketch done by a drawfriend on /mlp/. He did one for all the writers that asked, and I'm honored that he did one for me. I might change it later, but it'll stay for now.

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A simple ctrl+f/r for 0 would fix all those everyp0nies that 4chan makes us use. Much more readable when you aren't stuck with greentext. I suggest it.

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Same thing I told him, haha.

They really do stand out. It'd be a good idea to fix them.

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When I get some free time, I'll go back and remove the zeros. To be honest, it never bothered me and I didn't even think to get rid of them until someone said something.

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Bran, pls gew

Welp,Time for badass Mcgreentext to absolutely wreck this prick's shit

Off to a great start! Cant wait for that guard to get his ass kicked! Keep up the good work and i hope to see the new chapter soon!

I like the description, I will put this story on my "read later" list.

Well, I like it so far.
Lets see how the cliffhanger conflict play out in the next chapter.

MOARrrRRrrr!!!!1111oneoneoneeleven

Hey, guys

I wanted everyone to know that I have a ton of this story written in greentext format already, but I'm not planning on posting it here for a big reason.

I'm in the middle of re-writing this, and I've started writing two other stories.

The reason I'm re-writing it is half because of season 4 stuff, half because I hate the way Anon's character was turning out.

I'm sorry if it feels like I've lead anyone on, but I really feel like I can do better than what I have so far, so I'm not going to continue writing the story as is. The remake is well in progress, but I don't have a time when it'll be finished.

Honestly, I didn't think that many people would read it. It was posted here as an afterthought. It will take a little longer to change the greentext to prose, but I hope it'll be worth the wait.