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I live in the Midwestern US. Given my lack of travel experience, I prefer to write settings before characters. Stories with unique and interesting worlds, I shall read. If only there was philosophy...

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When the prince and necromancer, Blue Bones, is banished from the unknown Frozen North he must find a way to survive in new conditions or take over the throne. Taking a mechanical and curious device, called a train, and adapting at every stop only to settle into a seemingly busy port city doesn't seem appealing to Blue Bones. But he should be able to get a job here fairly quick. Without anything with him when he departs for his new life, he begins to miss the things he used and the dead ponies he used from the dungeon for his experiments. He had learned simple things in the time of three years. He is now seventeen and would be married, accrding to his traditions, but the exile made it impossible for him to wed anyone from the Northern Lands of the Cold he missed.

Cancelled because I haven't touched this in three years.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 14 )

Great so far. Keep it up!

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Glad you liked it, never been told good job for writing until now. Thanks.:pinkiesad2:

3549187 no problem. Just try to make chapters over 2k words and im sure it will be great! Dont fuck up!

Is this a crossover of some kind? For some reason, that's the vibe I'm getting. Also, what is the title image?

Ooo a fanfic that involves a necromancer- time to add this to awesome group then proceeding to read it.

You might want to change cover image, I think that got something (or should I say everything) to do with elder scroll oblivion. Something that fits your story would be a better cover image.

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Alright, I do admit I was being a dit lazy on that part. Thanks for the heads up.

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No, it's not a crossover but I can see why you'd think that.

By the way, here's a bit of advice, you might consider adding more tags, it usually makes stories more popular, as they turn up in search more often. From your description, I believe there will also be romance, so you might consider that tag. Also, depending on how future story will be and how necromancy is used, you might also consider a dark tag.

I have to say, this story looks quite promising. I will be waiting for future chapters, I hope you will continue and finish it.

UUUUUUHHHHHHHHH I'm very very oh so very confused, might wanna read this over a few times.

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What are you confused about? I'm interested in the explanation of your comment and I shall gladly answer any question you have and clear it up for you.

3697096 In the second chapter, it say's he's in Baltimare, but Twilight's there and lives on a ship, and there's a Sugarcube Corner there?

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Pinkie is helping expand Mr. and Mrs. Cake's shop to promote business, and Twilight recently bought a ship to help with ease tensions to the other nations as a princess.
I hope you still like the story.

Does anyone seem interested in being an editor? If so, please message me.

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