*whistles* damn sweetie. ;)

.......More. Now.

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Comin to you, some time soon.

3555197 Also, i may sound like a sick fuck saying this, but i kinda like scenes in books or such where one or more people are being chased or toyed with by a supernatural creature. Not like in horror movies, but like the forest chase scene. Just the feeling of helplessness, and then begging for mercy, it just seems cool to me. Yes, i know i sound sick.

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You're sick?

I'm the one who wrote this thing, what does that make me?

3557279 sexy

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Oh my, why thank you hot stuff.

3557279 A pineapple. It's the ONLY logical explination.

This is the most beautiful sight ive ever seen,bwaaaaahahaaa!!!!!!!

Eyyy.

Eyyyyy.

This is amazing, and I love you for having written it. There is a sort of overwhelming pleasure to be found reading something so incredibly steeped in blood, gore and sex, and there is a pervasive fondness one can feel only for characters who revel in that shedding of blood and that ravishing of delectable mares. In conclusion, I love this Sweetie Belle, and I hope she does nasty, nasty things to her friend (in a sexual way).

That said, I do have some two questions. 1) Does Rarity know about Sweetie Belle and demonhood and such? She seemed completely unused to the darker spectrum of life, murder and rape, and she didn't seem to connect Sweetie to the murders in Manehattan(?). Despite this, she walked in on Sweetie Belle before Sweetie did the whole filly-illusion-thingy. So was the illusion only dropped while she recast it, and it was on during the whole night, oder was? 2) Has Jake, Army Person Extraordinaire, looked at this yet? It seems to have a few thingamajiggers lying around, good sir.

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I'm glad you like the story so much. To answer your questions, no, Rarity doesn't know. The illusion thing you seem to be confused about, will be cleared up in the next chapter.

Edit: Sorry, two chapters.

As for the editing, you might have noticed there was a little mistake made involving me publishing the chapter before it was ready to be read. This also had the unfortunate effect of linking several people to a chapter which I had immediately taken off, which in turn led me to rush through the editing process and skip the beta-reader step entirely.

I'll... probably need to run clean up duty on this chapter sometime.

Well the mental images that this story has painted for me will be in my head for awhile. *sigh* I guess I'll just have to reread this story once it's finished to get them back "what a shame"

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Glad you're liking it.

Out of curiosity, what part has effected you the most so far?

I don't know why, other people of my age would find this terrible and disgusting, however i really like it and i'll follow this story till the end. Maybe it's sort of a fetish for me

In short: your story is awesome!

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Yes, it is weird how such trivial things such as rape, torture, and sadism can offend people. How can stuff like that possibly be upsetting?

In all honesty though, I'm glad you like the story. New chapters coming soon.

Very rarely do I find a story with both a good plot (Sweetie being a demon, not the other plot!), and plenty of depravity, gore, blood, sex, and badass fillies, with plenty of comedy. In short, I love it.

It's not clop worthy, but the gore is sublime!

Dragon never had a chance at less Sweetie is full for now

Interesting concept but it's cut to ribbons by its own edginess. I'll pass.

lets hope sweete bell doesn't want to eat a BABY DRAGON now.
ps. why don't they have a scared spike emoticon?

"The deeper we go the more light we loose."
"All the air is ejected from [my] lungs, and I give a wheezing cough when my back hits the wall."

Once again, WHAT THE HOLIEST FUCK HAVE I JUST READ

6159279 How dare you swear here! We don't use the H word! This is an abyssal plane of comments sections!

And here I am again, reading really fucked up shit and in all likelihood, slowly but surely descending into my username. I mean, while it isn't as straight gruesome as say, the really wild Aztec sacrifices, it's also a hell of a lot more cannibalism.

This doesn't even phase me.

I've attained a level of apathy that this isn't even my whole night.

My red eyes burst open. A dragon! A fuck mothering dragon! I've always heard about them, how their meat is the most succulent and juicy food a demon can hope to taste, how their blood is like fine wine compared to other races. Already a thin layer of drool drips down my chin.

Alucard, dat u?