It's like forgetting the words to your favorite song.
One un-sunny day in Wasteland Equestria a ghoul wakes to find himself in a world far from the one he remembers. His true name lost, he stumbles into an unforgiving broken world in hopes of finding his way back home. But the wasteland is a vengeful siren with a love for overkill, stopping at nothing until it gets what it wants - his unfortunate soul.
Warning - Contains gore, violence, dug use, sexual themes, heavy weapon use, and other subjects not recommended for a light stomach audience. Reader discretion advised.
Special thanks to KKat for merging two worlds into a fantastic mix of cute, crazy, and creepy. But most of all for taking those parts and creating a story that has left a mark in the hearts of many readers, fans, and aspiring writers.
Another special thanks to my wonderful pre-readers whose names shall be added as soon as I get the okay to attach their names onto such an embarrassing yet fun piece of work.
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You've got a good thing going on here. Good sense of suspense, grammar is pretty good.
You have my attention.
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Looks good so far
But there are some things I don't get yet:
- does your ghoul knows he's a ghoul
- does he know that there was a war (as far as I got it he went to sleep before the war and woke up...later)
But I'll definitely read the next chapter(s)
4108472 Thanks for commenting! I was going with that he doesn't yet know he's a ghoul. And in the next chapter, It'll explain what he knows or doesn't know about the war.
I like this
4356318 Thanks
Love this story a ton. The fact that it's from the point of view from a feral ghoul is something I have not seen yet so far. Keep up the good work author.
p.s. When is the next chapter coming out you think?