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Captain Lunar


Just a pony fan that loves the series. I mainly like shipping stories, crossovers, and some good old fashioned comedy. I also don't mind OC's as long as they're written well.

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Loyalty...... Honesty...... Generosity........ Kindness......... Laughter......... and........ Some other thing. These are the elements of Lucha Libre. Watch as 6 young Luchadoras band together to fight for honor.... family...... and donuts..... Also friendship, don't forget friendship.

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man I haven't seen that show in a long time :pinkiehappy: nostalgia rush

Okay, this seems nice for a beginning, funny characters, nice world and a balanced mash-up of ML and MLP:FiM.

Now bring up the fights! ¡Lucharan!

4031014 Thanks! And next chapter will be............. TWILIGHT SPARKLE VS PINKIE PIE!!! NO HOLDS BARRED!!! INSANE FOR THE MEMBRANE!!!!!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:..................................:twilightoops:

4031070 Remember, Pinkie Pie WAS technically the first pony Twilight met when she came to Ponyville. However instead of gasping and running off at first like in the show Pinkie instead makes Twilight have a match with her, having pulled out a full sized ring from one of the hidden ring stashes she has around town in case of "Wrestling emergencies"

Comment posted by Captain Lunar deleted Mar 4th, 2014

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Don't tell, show. I'll be waiting for it.

4031094 All I can say is........... It's gonna be a slobberknocker :pinkiecrazy:

Well, that escalated quickly.

What did we learned today kids?
Never mess with Pinkie Pie in any alternate universe, specially if said universe is wrestling themed.:pinkiehappy:

4123678 Just waiting on some commissioned cover art. :ajsmug: Wanna post the next chapter with a fresh face so to speak.

Great chapter, very funny indeed.

But.

Two problems in the spanish part. The first one is Rainbow's last name, while it can be properly translated as "Ir de prisa", it's not that accurate, a better translation would have been "Arcoiris Apurado" and it also keeps the single word basis. The other one is "hediondo idiotas". Hediondo is a male singular and idiotas is plural, then is the problem with hediondo being outdated by more than one or two generations, in the present we use "apestoso" to translate stinking but didn't even usually use that one. A more accurate phrase would have been "bola de idiotas" which in spirit means "bunch of idiots", it's commonly used and fall into neutral territory around Latino America.
But those are only suggestions, use them or not as you want.:twilightsmile:

4220029 And fixed!

Also, Rainbow Dash being Latina............. Thoughts? Also she has the same accent she does in the actual show, mostly due to living in America for a good while, but still slips into Spanish now and again.

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Not a bad twist, Dash being a foreign from Latino America fits with the canon one being from Cloudsdale. You kept her in character which is good too. No complains there.
For further references I would suggest to her changing to spanish using full sentences instead of just words, it sound more natural. Also, in moments of stress or joy, when is more easy for a new talker to break translation and go back to mother language. Any doubt about it just ask and will help.

4220090 Also did you notice the cover art? A friend of mine did it!

4220166
Bastante buena de hecho. Dile a tu amigo que lo felicito, está muy bien hecha.

4220169 I've got two other people who were going to do it for free before he offered, but I think I'll be using all three of them if the other two get done. Kinda alternate ya know?

:twilightsmile:

Here's hoping this gets a new chapter ever....

:twilightsmile:

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