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Captain Lunar


Just a pony fan that loves the series. I mainly like shipping stories, crossovers, and some good old fashioned comedy. I also don't mind OC's as long as they're written well.

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In another Universe, Twilight Sparkle and her friends are kidnapped and taken to places all over the globe. Luckily, help came in the form of herself, but from another Universe entirely! Now, stuck in a blizzard, this other Twilight recounts the Secret Origins of how she became the Emerald Knight! The Green Lantern!

Co-written with another author from fanfiction.com(He Who See's)

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 20 )

Two DC crossovers in one day!? OH MY!

I liked it! Anything having to do with the Green Lantern is great in my books!

With anair of amusement

I think you meant 'With an air of amusement'

expect about five years

'Except about five years older'

There are a few more, but I won't bother pointing them out. I suggest you go over this one more time with a fine tooth-comb.

Also, you've given me an idea for my own Green Lantern fic. I wonder how my editor would feel about Green Lantern meeting Green Lantern...

I can't quite brain well enough to give this a read and a review, so I'll toss this on my Read Later list and give you a roit proppa wun soon enough. Just after I get some sleep...

Too tired to leave a full-fledged review, but one glaring problem I noticed:

"Luckily though, I think I have just the solution to answer any and all questions I know you have going through your mind right now." She said

You need to replace the period inside the quote with a comma, and make the "She" lowercase. It seems like a small mistake, but it's repeated over and over and begins to be a nagging issue. Make sure you do this with every statement. Other than that, grammar and punctuation seem to be good.

~Schlippy
TWE Reviewer and...blah, blah, whatever

I always thought of Twilight being like Hal Jordan

You sneaky little Mississipian! Since when were you going to tell me you posted it here to!?

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When you needed to know. Which is now. I posted the story on FIMfiction.

Yeah...a few days after the fact. :trollestia:

Hey there. Glad to see this story on THIS site too. :-D You and Vunderguy, so far, are doing a magnificent job on the depiction of this MLP-DC merger verse. Okay, so Other Twilight is Green Lantern, the Crusaders are the Marvel Family and Big Mac is Superman. Makes me pleasantly curious as to who you and Vunderguy cast as the other DC super-heroes. :-D It also makes me wonder if the rest of the Mane Six (minus maybe Pinkie Pie) are also getting help from THEIR super-hero counterparts (though I'll freely admit I could very well be wrong about that wild guess). Still, I'm perfectly willing to wait and see.

Very nice image... And story... Keep up the good work. ;)

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Comment posted by VunderGuy deleted Feb 16th, 2013

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Comment posted by VunderGuy deleted Feb 16th, 2013

Doctor Whooves should be the Golden Age GL (Alan Scott), since neither can use their deus-ex machina on wood. Plus it's funny.

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Call their rings Deus Ex Machinas in modern times ONE MORE TIME (unless of course, you mean it in the term that they are machines created by the gods in which case it should be Machina Ex Deus).

2306008 But Allan's ring wasn't created by the gods, nor was the Doctor's Sonic Screwdriver. I simply meant that neither Allan Scott or Doctor Whooves can use their signature devices on wood.

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Ah. Alright then. Forgive me for my outburst of immense rage. I've spent WAY too much time on factpile.

Lunar defense justice you have the ability to overcome great fear,welcome to the green lantern corps.

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