Something is not right in the batpony town of Hollow Shades. A year will change more than you think.
A story written for Equestria Daily's Batpony Writeoff
Trying my hand at this 'writing' thing.
Something is not right in the batpony town of Hollow Shades. A year will change more than you think.
A story written for Equestria Daily's Batpony Writeoff
There are two "II's". Sorry about that, I'm not sure how it happened.
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You can totally fix that, you know. <.< Just hit the edit button in chapter view.
Anyway, this could use some editing, but I feel like you've got the basis for a good story here. Check out some of the resources at this link, and keep writing. You're off to a good start. :)