It was nighttime, and all of Ponyville was asleep. Josie laid on Twilight's bed as she slept.
Yet, something was still walking the streets.
It had no legs, and it's eyes were as bright as the stars.
Class: Keter
Too bad a rainbow-maned pegasus was out that late.
She didn't see it, but she heard it.
"Huh? Who's there?"
*inaudible whisper*
"What was that?"
*inaudible whisper*
"Who are you? I can't even-"
Then she saw the eyes.
Then she ran straight into the library, waking Twilight.
"What the hay, Rainbow Dash!?"
"Twilight, there's something outside!"
"What?"
"I... I don't know! All I saw was the eyes!"
"How do you- nevermind."
Suddenly, a dark smoke flowed into the library.
"I think that's what you're talking about."
you need to make this guy into a main antagonist
3448871 yes
yes you do
Activate your time travel
NOOAAOOOOAAAAAOOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
I need a new idea for a new story.
3452218 thank you
I'm sorry, but I don't like people who talk shit about my stories.
Everyone else likes it.
If you don't, then stop fucking reading.
It's that simple.
3450872 Well someone had seen SCP 096 before that happened
And maybe if no one sees SCP 096's face he can be killed DID YOU THINK OF THAT
YOU SIR HAVE MADE ME MAD
3452222 He's not dead
3454002 uh what the fuck are you talking about scp 96 like I said got shot by a AP round and massacred an entire military force and took massive damage like his chest mutilated and like you said maybe he can die if no one looks at his face but after his rage he seems to survive the after damage and the foundation probably tried that and failed. so you sir made me face palm people these days you must be trolling, PS I really hope so.
3452999 who's talking shit about you're story I'm just really pissed that shy guy was so easily killed and if you previously read my comments... WHAT THE FUCK!!
3454984
Just stop talking.
Please.
3455517 I'm just asking geez
3455517 You shouldn't post a story if you don't want criticism.