• Member Since 18th Sep, 2013
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Darkened Lightning Storm


You, dear reader, are the reason any of us love what we do. You build up our worlds, and help us develop what and who we are. Without you, we wouldn't be ourselves.

T

Inkstroke has been alone for years with her busy sister, Amber Wing. She never really had any friends except Unwanted, a short-tempered, rude, inconsiderate pain in the flank. But Inkstroke doesn't care. she sees a good, kind-hearted, loyal friend somewhere inside of him, even if others don't. Inkstroke will do anything to break Unwanted of his nasty ways and help him become a better pony, even if it means getting hit and shoved along the way.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 19 )

I like where this is going and the POV being from a filly grabs my intrest as well.

Also that depression poem is nice as well (as nice as a poem about depression can be) and quite accurate.

3381656 Thanks! I always wanted to write a story in a first person POV, but I didn't really know what to do. I had to write the poem for school and the idea kinda just slapped me across the face.

3385147 -mind controls click into drawing a mustache on him- :trixieshiftleft: XD. oh Unwanted would be like "RAAAAAAAAAAAAAGE" and, if click got lucky, Unwanted would only break all 4 of his legs.

...... This is strangly like happy...sad and stuff owo

Yay some one liked my weather clearing! ;D
Now i need to think of a way to add some of yours in since the double date>w>

derp I'll think of something after the chapter I'm working on owo

I spotted one ;D

"Today's are first anniversary. I wouldn't wanna miss it now would I?"
^
;D

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ugh, your such a derp val. Always pointing out my flaws like you do -.- SUCH a pain in my flank.

jk, u know I luv ya dude (wasn't jking about the pain in my flank part though X3....maybe) :D and thank you for pointing that out. I'll fix that sooner or later, probably later than sooner, but whatever.

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But, what if i wasn't a pain in the flank owo.......but a flank!!

3395428 I need to be careful with what I say around you sometimes.. >_> pain in my hoof...

3395807 Yes you do need to becareful >w>
heh =p

3395811 There are reasons I'm friends with pinkamelia.... :pinkiecrazy:

3395823

I see owo

get myside of the collab..well of it so far XD that was done after an hour due to me talking to some pony else owo and the next chapter is coming soon!

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Aren't you Mr. popular? Am I holding up the line to talk to the great and powerful trix- I mean Valentine-crin?

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why, yes ya are >w>
-troll face-

XD nah jsut some pony else :3

the collab bit i can work on more its just what i threw together ;D

People can get the buck out of line then XD. -returns the troll-

and what you wrote was fine. After I read it was was just like "Cute. He made a mistake and didn't bother to fix it. what a Pain in my flank..." XD lol jk. And btw about the firefox thing, I used a magnet. :3

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