Memories

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Many years have passed. With his naïve shell shattered and the reality of life pounding against him for his entire life, Snails returns to Ponyville as an ancient pony. Lamenting about his life, Snails walks the path of memories.

Author's Note: A great thanks to the wonderful Flint Sparks for helping to write this fic with me!

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Bad_Seed_72

Bad_Seed_72 #1 · Oct 21st, 2013 · · ·

Gelding?

Uh oh...

electreXcessive

electreXcessive #2 · Oct 21st, 2013 · · ·

3375682
Yeah, changed that up. I didn't write the descrips, but I should've checked what certain words meant before I posted :V

MDNGHTRDHTLN

MDNGHTRDHTLN #3 · Oct 21st, 2013 · · ·

OH GOD

That escalated quickly.

But, in all seriousness, this was a very thought-provoking and deeply meaningful piece of literature, and suffice it to say that I am glad that I read it.

Now, if you'll excuse me, I need to get back to explaining the difference between saturated and unsaturated triglycerides for my organic chemistry class.

MDNGHTRDHTLN

MDNGHTRDHTLN #4 · Oct 21st, 2013 · · 1 ·

3375859 Well, maybe 'organic chemistry class' isn't the best word for it. It's a part of my Honors Biology class.

Bad_Seed_72

Bad_Seed_72 #5 · Oct 21st, 2013 · · ·

I’m sorry if I’m repeating myself, and I hope you’ll forgive the rambling of a tired, old gelding

I just couldn’t help myself, though I suppose now that you see how the world shaped me and the gelding that I have become.

Uh... I think you mean stallion.

That is why I come here sometimes; to remind myself of what I once had, but have now lost. I come back to a place that was special for me and an anchor for my life. I think that I’m the only one that still visits this old place. The others all forgot about it when it was shut down, so I guess in a way me and the school are similar. We’ve been forgotten by the world, in its ever turning continuous expanse.

This paragraph is repeated twice in here...

And that ending... those feels...