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Gyvon

Joined January 2012
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Stories (5)

  • Halo: On the Wings of Angels
    Halo Crossover. Twilight Sparkle is teleported to a world about to be glassed by The Covenant.

    34,391 words · 22,355 views · 2,443 likes · 55 dislikes
  • Hired Gun
    A Private Military Contractor unknowingly agrees to a job offer that takes him to Equestria
    24,776 words · 8,958 views · 1,298 likes · 34 dislikes
  • Burn Notice: The Equestrian Files.
    Michael Weston and Sam Axe are caught in an explosion at Michael's loft and end up in Ponyville.
    5,355 words · 1,705 views · 92 likes · 3 dislikes
  • My Little Pony: Flesh and Steel
    Crossover between FIM and Transformers, starring my original transformer character.
    43,921 words · 4,323 views · 106 likes · 10 dislikes
  • Queen of the Predacons.
    25,252 words · 1,751 views · 71 likes · 12 dislikes

Blog Posts (41)


It has been several months since the disappearance of Twilight Sparkle..

One night, after watching her sister raise the Moon and set the heavens alight, Princess Celestia begins to bed down for the night, only to be interrupted by portal forming in her room.  From out of the portal comes none other than Twilight Sparkle, garbed in strange armor.

Princess Celestia, along with Luna, Cadence, and Shining Armor, are overjoyed by the Element of Magic's return, but are justifiably curious as to where she had been and what she had been doing.  And so, Twilight begins her tale.  A tale of survival against impossible odds.  A tale of a people fighting for the most basic right of all sentient beings.  The right to exist.

First Published
3rd Jul 2012
Last Modified
7th Nov 2012

Comments ( 1,994 )

#1 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

Special thanks go to TJbrena for aid in some of the descriptions.

#2 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

Wow, I was expecting another ODST in Equestria fic but this is certainly different. Well written and a captivating story, well done! I've liked and favorited it, hope to see more.

#3 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

Oh look, another Halo crossover.

>Read summary

You have my attention, sir. I've had a few ideas of my own about Twilight going on some great adventure and relating it to her friends and family, and this is right up that alley.

#4 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

Tracking. Can't wait to see where this goes! Have a :moustache:

#5 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

You sir, are a master of your craft.

#6 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

This is a great story. You sir, have earned a Watch, Fav, and a thumbs up! :twilightsmile:

#7 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

Nice. WRITE SOME MOAR NAO!

#8 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

>>851378

Thank you good sir for giving my story a fair shake, but I feel a rant coming on  Keep in mind, this is not directed at you.

Ok, rant incoming:  I've seen several people on here complain about Halo fics when they're posted, when the fic is clearly titled as a halo fic, and nobody is forcing them to read a Halo fic.  I just gotta ask "why?"  Why did you have to take the minute out of your time to click on a fic you were not going to read anyways.  Does it really bother you that much that a popular video game series got a crossover story?

Ok, rant over.  Again, not directed at anyone in particular.  Thanks again for giving the story a fair trial.

#9 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

>>851391

You flatter me, good sir.  Also, take heart, my other story is still on track.

#10 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

>>851421

I know what you mean. I think it's more because people get jaded about the same story being written time and time again rather than that they're Halo crossovers. Most of them end up being some minor variation of the same thing - ODSTs in Equestria, OC Spartans or a Noble Team Spartan in Equestria, occasionally the Chief in Equestria... it isn't often that someone comes up with a fresh, unique idea.

#11 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

This could be good. Please make it so.

#12 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

>>851421

And the downvote has just confimed that.

#14 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

i must have more!

#15 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

Wow 3 great halo/pony crossover fan fics in 24 hours, this is a sign!

#16 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

I have a feeling that this is going to be the start of a beautiful friendship :twilightsmile:

And that the lavander/purple debate is going to become a running gag between her and the ODST's :rainbowwild:

Looking forward to more.

#17 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

dude, thats an awesome story!

Try to read it with halo soundtrack :3 its amazing :) :heart:

#18 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

I like this Halo crossover. It's different from the others I read, and it has an interesting plot. I'm currently helping out with two other Halo crossovers; one of which is written by TJbrena. If you need somebody to help you with proofreading or anything like it, I would be more than happy to help. :eeyup:

#19 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

Alright, having now read it, I like it so far. I think the prologue and Twilight's return could've benefited from being written with more dramatic "oomph" for lack of a better word, but that's just me going "that's not how I'd have done it" I guess.

Two ODSTs making 550+ year old Terminator and Futurama references? Sure, why not. We quote Shakespeare. How they handle Twilight's appearance? Eh... at this point they've probably seen so much crazy shit from the Covenant they find her refreshing. After floating tentacle things with gasbags on their backs and insane engineering abilities, squid-headed reptile things with plasma katars, and big monkey things with gravity hammers, what's a purple (LAVENDER!) unicorn with magic?

#20 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

Nicely done, it's refreshing to see a good Halo crossover with an original concept!  There's only one glaring problem...  There isn't enough of it!

#21 · Chapter 1 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

sounds legit. keep it coming:pinkiehappy:

#22 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

cant wait for the next chapter

#23 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

Digging the Futurama toss up. "Is the Space Pope reptilian?" Classic line man!

#24 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

>>851829

Wanna know what makes it even funnier?  The Space Popes (Prophets) ARE reptilian.

#25 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

>>851844

Wouldn't know myself. Never been big into the whole Halo thing, or CoD for that matter. I am a Battlefield and Fallout fan myself.

#26 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

upvote just for writing an ORIGINAL halo/mlp cross-over :pinkiehappy:

#27 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

A halo crossover that takes place in the halo universe? Yes please :pinkiehappy:

#28 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

Nice twilight is about to become 2000% cooler when she gets her armor.

#29 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

Me likey. :pinkiehappy:

#30 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

WOW! This is so awesome! :rainbowkiss:

You're a great writer. Keep it up! :twilightsmile:

#31 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

Lol you got Tony DiNardo from NCIS, Didn't you? The one where Tony goes undercover for the director and they change only his last name? hehehe i caught it pretty quickly. :twilightsmile:

Great story so far. I really like it. definitely a favorite. :pinkiehappy:

#32 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

>>852207

Bingo, and 20th/21st century pop-culture references are his thing.

#33 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

>>852244

Haha! as i read this i was like. OH MAH GOD!! HALO TONY! XD Everytime i watch NCIS now, im going to look at tony as both a brony, and an ODST. :yay:

#34 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

The flow of this story leaves me craving for more.

#35 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

*Slow Clap*

#36 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

Hmm...this looks interesting and is, so far, really good.

I'll keep an eye on this. Great job so far!!! :pinkiehappy:

#37 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

wow im certainly gona want more of this.............and if twi can engineer the covies weapons that go off energy at least to be powered thru her raw magic then......well....walking WMD...:twilightoops:

#38 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

*click*

you hear that?  Thats the sound if me clicking the favorite button with my mouse :pinkiesmile:

#40 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

The only way a Halo fic can succeed in this crowded market is through originality; this has that in the bag. I'm happy to have helped here, and I'm happy to help anypony on here who requests help with a concept, description, emotion or anything like that! :ajsmug:

My claim to originality is more through portraying OC SPARTAN-IIIs as humans with insecurities, quirks, emotions, beliefs and values of their own; by showing that they are still only human, as much as some of them hate it. Even a super-soldier who has seen worlds burned, family and friends die, killed both his fellow man and alien hordes can still have a heart. :eeyup:

#41 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

>>852566

I agree with the man with wicked mustache and cigar.:pinkiehappy:

Loving the story! Please keep up the writing. :twilightsmile:

#42 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

This is amazing!

Please make more.

Thank you. :twilightsmile:

#43 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

Originality! YES! :pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::yay:

#44 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

every one got every refrence but hitch hicker's ultimate guide to the universe really "dont panic" love it

#45 · Chapter 1 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

but there was no way in Tartarus that Cadence was going to let him go alone, especially as tired as he is.     was

*edit* caught another one: She then jumped up onto the bed and nuzzled the Princess Affectionately.     Shouldn't be capitalized.

Looks cool so far...

#46 · Chapter 1 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

SOOOO keeping an eye on this! :pinkiehappy:

#47 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

>>852723

I would've gotten it too if it hadn't been so damn long since I read it, which was in either 5th or 6th grade.

#48 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

>>851561

What're the others?

#49 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

>>852788

I've never read Hitch hikers Guide.  That reference is just so pervasive.

#50 · Chapter 2 · 93w, 4d ago · · ·

Was gonna come in and ask why this go so many views. Saw the comments, so I'll give this a read later. But before I do start reading, Please please please tell me: Is there any Twilestia?

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