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TJbrena
User ID: 39,649
Registered: 11th Jun 2012
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I write crossovers for the most part. I like to take games almost nobody's done a cross with before and then use that. I prefer to develop characters by putting them in unique situations, so none of my fics are entirely conventional. The "X goes to Equestria and saves it" plot isn't enough for me as a writer, so I always make sure that there's more to my stories than that.

My writing is mostly self-taught, with some stuff learned from my Lit classes in my junior and senior years of high school. Given how much I read and how much fiction I absorb in general, I guess I shouldn't be that surprised about what I create.

I also prize a degree of originality. There aren't many Crysis or Republic Commando fics here on FIMfiction. And the Metroid-Fallout crossover I write on FanFiction.net is the only one of its kind as well.

Consequently, I have a thorough disdain for TwiDash, Twilestia, TwiLuna, and Inter-Mane6 shipping in general. This is largely because of how monotonous they are despite being so ill-considered and also so overly common.

Name: [REDACTED]

Gender: Male

Age: 18

Other Internet Aliases: Delta1138 (Wikia), TJbrena (Youtube, /mlp/, XBL)

Location: [REDACTED], Arizona, USA

Favorite Artists: Frank Sinatra, Dean Martin, Bing Crosby, Queen, Rolling Stones

Favorite Composers: Martin O'Donnell, Harry Gregson-Williams, Hans Zimmer, Jeehun Hwang

Favorite Shows: MLP:FiM, NCIS, NCIS: LA, The Walking Dead, South Park, Archer, Wilfred, Drawn Together, The Colbert Report, The Daily Show, White Collar, Burn Notice, American Dad, Futurama, Robot Chicken

Enjoys: Video games, TV, reading, writing, interwebz

Hates: Changelings

Favorite Ponies (Mane 6) from most fave to least fave:

1. Twilight Sparkle (who also holds the status of being my favorite pony)

2. Applejack

3. Rainbow Dash

4. Pinkie Pie

5. Fluttershy

6. Rarity

Also, Celestia is my favorite of the original three Princesses.

Favorite Video Game Franchise of All Time: Halo

Favorite RPG franchise: Fallout

Favorite Modern War FPS: Battlefield 3

Favorite Near Future FPS: Crysis 2

Most anticipated games:

Destiny (Bungie Studios)

Metal Gear Solid: Ground Zeroes (Kojima Productions)*

Metal Gear Solid V: The Phantom Pain (Kojima Productions)*

Tom Clancy's Rainbow 6: Patriots (Ubisoft Montreal, Ubisoft Red Storm, Ubisoft Toronto)

Tom Clancy's Splinter Cell: Blacklist (Ubisoft Toronto)

* These two may in fact be a single game.

Top 3 Favorite Video Game Series:

1. Halo

2. Metal Gear Solid

3. Fallout

Story I'm most proud of: Halo: The Interlopers

Story I feel isn't getting the attention it deserves: City on Fire

Unexpected success: Star Wars: Republic Commando: Brothers All

Preferred writing style: Third-person subjective

Writing weakness(es): Creating fight scenes more than a few paragraphs long.

Author who has influenced my style the most: Tom Clancy. Some of the little things I do, like the three stars to break off a segment or the italics for thought are the same as Clancy. I also credit him with writing my favorite books. We actually share the same birthday, April 12th.

Some things you should know about my writing habits:

1. I have a set order I publish fics in, and I stick to it.

2. I have a plot journal for every story I write. In it I summarize past and future chapters, write down ideas and conversations/quotes I want to integrate. This means that if I have an idea for a fic when I'm working on a different one, I can still get that idea down.

Common themes and elements

You can expect to see these in my fics, although I have a few concepts that'd violate my headcanon.

1. War. Equis (the planet upon which Equestria is located) is more similar to Earth than is directly shown. Dialogue in the show indicates the existence of wars, tanks, and bullets. Modern technology is utilized, weaponry included. After noticing that many devices were shown in the show that had no practicality for ponies, I have come to the conclusion that much of their technology is based on Earth's. Furthermore, the reason not all of this is shown in the show is that some regions are simply less technologically inclined, as well as it being a kid's show.

2. Names. If you're a character in a fic of mine, don't be surprised if you have a Meaningful Name.

3. Opulence References. I has it them.

4. Video Games. Since the thing that I enjoy more than ponies is video games, all of my crossovers so far are game crossovers. What's more, there's always a character in one of my fics who's a gamer.

5. Sad. Every one of my protagonists has a tragic past and/or ambiguous future. Be it because of their horrible losses and constant servitude combined with guilt, or a shorter lifespan than those they grow to care about, a loss of humanity as they become more and more machine, or being caught in a scandalous web of deceit.

6. With great power comes great responsibility. Every protagonist I write has a strong sense of duty. They feel that they have the power to change things for the better, to make a difference, and they have no right to let that potential go unused. They may not like what they are, but they know that they are needed.

Story Schedule

Completed

1. Halo: The Interlopers

In Progress/Ordered Updates

1. Crysis: The Guardian Prophecy

2. Star Wars: Republic Commando: Brothers All

In Progress/Irregular Updates

1. City on Fire

In Development

1. Deus Ex: Human Supremacy Two shadowy rulers competing for power, one unicorn and one human. Three endings. One man to decide the fate of two worlds.

2. Ghost Recon: Phantom Hunt (GRAW 2 crossover) A few months after ending the Mexican insurgency, the Ghosts are sent on a mission to Cuba. After passing through the Bermuda Triangle, they find themselves someplace new...

3. A Team of Mavericks Twelve heroes from multiple universes are brought together to stop their own 'verses from leaking into Equestria. A cyborg security officer. A space marine that is the bane of Hell. An ODST. A newly-minted Ranger of the Moscow Metro. A post-human warrior. A theoretical physicist. A CEC engineer. The co-founder of the Blue Suns. The most dangerous bounty hunter in the galaxy. The Yautja who slayed the Abomination. A former UNATCO agent. A Resistance aligned T-850, Model 101.

In Development Hell

1. Battlefield: Harm and Harmony

2. Fallout: Never Roam Alone Crossover featuring a headcanon LW/Courier, an LW from a different Fallout-verse, and a Courier from a third Fallout-verse, all in Equestria at the same time

3. Resurrection of Nightmare After many attempts, Nightmare Moon has finally returned. Though her powers are weakened, she builds an army at an ever-increasing pace. There is more than one gate to Hell.

Planned Fics

1. Halo: The Untold: A collection of short stories and story arcs that take place at around the same time as the Interlopers.

2. Halo: The Intruders: The sequel proper to The Interlopers.

Favorite Comedies

[Comedy] [Alternate Universe]
Twilight Sparkle is being sent to Ponyville to learn about friendship. She's not happy about it.
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[Romance] [Tragedy] [Comedy] [Random] [Crossover] [Adventure]
What happens when the Reds and Blues finally get Church out of the Epsilon unit? Caboose decides he wants a turn in the unit, of course! What happens next? Well let's just say he always did say he wanted a pony, now he has a world full of them.
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[Comedy] [Crossover] [Adventure] [Human]
Shawn Spencer, fake psychic detective, goes where no man has gone before.
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[Romance] [Comedy] [Adventure]
Silly Octavia, Vinyl's not a vampire, right?
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[Comedy] [Random]
Everyone wonders what Scootaloo's story is. Apparently, everypony in Ponyville has their own answer
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Favorite (Semi-)Serious Stories

[Comedy] [Crossover] [Adventure] [Human]
After activating the slipspace drive Jorge is teleported to a strange new world.
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[Dark] [Crossover] [Adventure] [Alternate Universe] [Human]
Halo Crossover. Twilight Sparkle is teleported to a world about to be glassed by The Covenant.
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[Dark] [Crossover] [Adventure] [Alternate Universe] [Human]
The Lone Wanderer is in a predicament. Fallout/FIM crossover. HiE
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[Dark] [Comedy] [Crossover] [Human]
The Mojave's deadliest in Equestria
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[Romance] [Sad] [Comedy] [Crossover] [Adventure] [Human]
Spider-Man is brought to Equestria for a second chance at life, but his luck may ruin his opportunity before it can truly begin.
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More Truly Excellent Stories (No genre limits)

[Sad] [Alternate Universe]
Whether by the sword or the slow decay of time, Shining Armor will die.
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[Slice of Life]
Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash's friendship is put to the test as past mistakes are dug up.
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[Dark] [Crossover] [Adventure] [Human]
A Ghost team, stranded in a new world, goes to war alongside the Equestrians.
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[Tragedy] [Sad] [Slice of Life]
Twilight is adopted; Celestia is unsurprised.
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[Romance] [Sad]
A sociological experiment gone horribly right leaves Twilight on the verge of the most important decision of her life.
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Some of my favorite video game music composers

Marty O'Donnell, from Bungie Studios.

Harry Gregson-Williams, during his work with Kojima Productions.

That one guy from DICE whose name I can't remember, but he's elder-god-tier like the other guys on this list.

Hans Zimmer, specifically for his work with Crytek in Crysis 2.

And lastly, Jeehun Hwang. His work in the various MechAssault games was excellent, but his best work in my opinion was in the 1997 game Heavy Gear.

Princess Celestia is gonna get shipped. She was always my favorite of the three Princesses, before Twilight's coronation at least. My first time considering shipping her was actually with the grief-stricken Master Chief in Halo: The Intruders. Needless to say, I ruled that out pretty damn quick. First off, I'm not breaking from my tradition of shipping with characters from video game universes. Nor am I breaking with my tradition of military experience for the protagonist. However, unlike other stories of mine, where the protagonist(s) is/are physically exceptional because of some sort of event(s) that made them better than most/all they served beside, he is a Badass Normal. Clone commandos were genetically modified and grown from prime genetic stock, Alcatraz was fused with a hi-tech supersuit, Mark was raised to be a soldier from a young age and physically altered to be a superior warrior, Marked Target was given superpowers in a freak accident. But this man is 100% organic free-range badass.

So I'm asking those of you with experience writing Princess Celestia, especially in romance fics, to lend a hand/hoof. Leave a comment and tell me what parts of her romances you think you're best at, and maybe give some advice. It's a lot easier to write the Mane 6, because there's so much canon about them already out there, but the Princesses have less material so it's harder to get them "right". I realize that leaves me more room for interpretation of her character, but I want this to be a believable romance, something where the reader can really see how she'd feel the way she does about certain things.

My interpretation is that she's idealistic, but inwardly sad, lonely and pessimistic. Not bitter, just depressed. I mean, she banished her sister to the moon when could've prevented the whole NMM incident if she'd been there for her. Just a decade before, she clashed with her elder sister, who after a violent confrontation was exiled to another continent. She's seen everypony grow old and die except her. She raised the sun and protected her subjects from the grim realities of the world outside Equestria for over a millennium. Just as she is emotionally isolated, Equestria is highly insular. She puts on a happy face for the sake of others, and helps those around her, trying to redeem herself; Equestria preaches peace and freedom, and provides foreign aid, but does little beyond that, fearful of creating new conflict. A thousand years of emotional pain.

She finds a kindred spirit. Someone who's been a leader since a young age, also in the face of loss and hardship. Someone with the weight of the free world frequently on his shoulders. His failures are fewer due to the smaller scope of his leadership, but every one of them is much more personal. The dead he led weren't simply people with a shorter lifespan, they had even more life ahead of them than he did. And despite the camaraderie, he knows that the mission will always come before his friends. So he tries not to allow himself to become too attached to them, his emotional isolation a defense mechanism against the inevitable deaths of his allies. But all the same, they're like family to him, making it all the more painful each time he lost a man or woman.

On a related note, this story also has a subplot involving the initial romance between Shining Armor and Princess Cadance. I might cut that part, but I'd rather not. Again, tell me if you can give any help on that front.

Anyway, with 12,805 words written/typed for that story so far, I'm returning to work on my Crysis fic for now.

I saw the Equestria Girls Trailer, and found info on the new Heavy Gear game.

Here's my reaction to both of them.

Essentially, an M. Bison "YES! YES!" immediately followed by a "FFFFFUUUUUUUUU-". The EqGirls speaks for itself, but my problem with the Heavy Gear game is a little less obvious.

Be immersed in the unforgiving world of the Heavy Gear Assault. You are a pilot on the distant planet of Terra Nova, playing in the high stakes game of competitive Gear Dueling. At its core, Heavy Gear Assault is a fast paced first person simulator where the pilot is actually a character in the game. You have fine grained control over every aspect of customization in the game through our comprehensive Gear Bay facility. Heavy Gear Assault targets next-generation PC hardware for initial release.

I don't do much PC gaming, mainly because I don't have a good computer, or the funds to build one. And I'm not sinking money I don't have into a PC for a game that's only reached 13% of its funding goal of $900,000. Now, the "initial release" thing gives me hope that a console version might exist at some point, but I don't expect that to happen.

Now I'll leave you with some of the video game best music ever. Of all time.

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Workin' Hard


Star Wars: Republic Commando: Brothers All

IF YOU FAVE IT, LIKE IT!

A few days ago, RC-1207 "Sev" was pounding a Seperatist ship with Wookie turbolasers when he was overwhelmed. Now he's in a prison camp a few lightyears away. His cellmate is a male quadruped calling himself "Big Macintosh". He doesn't know where his brothers in Delta Squad are, or even where he is.

RC-1000 is the newest member of Tau Squad. Or was, rather. After the rest of Beta Squad was killed in action, he was assigned to Tau, who had just lost their own brother. They were tolerant but distant, and on his second mission with them the "new guy" got captured. Now he's sharing a cell with a female quadruped named "Octavia".

They're going to bust out. And as they try to adjust to the thought that they each might be the sole warrior on the planet, they will think more than a clone, even a commando, normally would. They will fight to defend their new friends. To defend aliens that care about them in ways they haven't experienced as mere soldiers.

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City on Fire

Some ponies enjoy going to the dentist. Not because they expect the dental X-ray to give them superpowers, but that does happen sometimes. It certainly seems to have happened to Marked Target, former Solar Saber and heir to Target Enterprises. Of course, he couldn't just get cool powers and be done with it, somepony had to die and motivate him to fight crime.

Certain griffons can get their act together after losing somepony (perhaps a rainbow-maned BFF) important to them, but Gilda Grimwing ain't one. She's more the type to make you think that, and steal things using lethal force while you sleep in your bed a few blocks away.

Occasionally, insanity runs in the family, and sometimes it just takes a little bit of an experimental bio-weapon based on Changeling DNA to give somepony like Inkamena Pie the best, most anarchic time of her life.

And once in a while, a washed up magician might usurp the mantle of a missing superheroine last seen thousands of miles away. When she does, she just might try to take credit for every single foiled crime in Manehattan, even if she has to fight the good guys to do it...

A/N: Despite the usage of human technologies, the ponies are not anthro.

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Welcome to the Terminator group! :pinkiehappy:

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thanks for the watch! :pinkiesmile:

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um, update on star wars, please?:fluttershysad:

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I request that you leave at once, Sir Denton!

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hey,

It's me that guy who pmed you over the course of the week well if your getting this that means you want to have your story added well at the moment i have three hundred other people to deal with so if you wold be so kind as to add it your self i would be ever so greatful.

Thankyou

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>>314074 nah its ok :pinkiehappy::derpytongue2: I am fully aware of it lol :twilightsheepish:

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>>310648

Oh, my bad. :twilightsheepish: There aren't nearly enough pegasisters on this site, and I didn't look at your avatar before posting that.

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