• Published 4th Mar 2012
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I want to tell you what i'm feeling and hope for the best in life - JustAnotherBadSonicOC



A Sweet AppleDash series that is filled with everyday romance, adventure and a little bit of comedy!

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The start of a new love in my life


I want to tell you what I’m feeling
(Based off of Misty’s song from Pokémon)
“Out here in the quiet of the night”. “Hey Applejack”! “Hiya Dash!” “What are yah up to?” “Oh Nothing much….” “Oh.” “By the way” “Yeah Dash?” “You wanna go watch the sunset together?” “Why I sure would!” “Ok! See you in a bit!” Ok Dash I’ll see you later!” Rainbow felt herself Blush a bit. “Beneath the stars… And moon “Today could be the day.” Later that day, “Well Dash I’m here!” “Okay!” They sat there and watched the sun as it began to set. “Hey Applejack?” “Yeah Rainbow?” “Can I tell you something?” "uhhhhhhhhh Sure" "Well, ummmm I…..I….” Rainbow felt nervous. “What if she turns me down?” “Rainbow?”
“Yeah Aj?” “Are Yah alright?” “Your Turnin Bright Red.” “Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Y…Y…Yeah!"
“I wanna tell you what I’m feeling, but I’m afraid that you break my heart” “And I don’t know where to start”

“Are yah sure?” “Yeah!” Rainbow felt her heart begin to beat quicker and quicker with each seconed that passed. “Rainbow?” “Yeah Aj?”
“What did yah want to tell me?” “Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I wanted to tell you that I…I…I” “Awwwwww Screw it!” Rainbow Grabbed Aj and kissed her, Applejacks eyes widened. But then she softly returned it,
“I want to tell what I’m feeling and to say that, I love you.” They soon broke the kiss. They were both blushing very hard. Rainbow could feel her heart beating at a really astounding rate than before, “i…i…I’m Sorry Aj”
“You don’t have to be sorry Sugarcube.” “I don’t?” “No!” That’s when Aj tackled Rainbow and kissed her once more, Rainbow felt her heart nearly explode. They both sat there and watched the sunset once more.

“I try but I can’t pretend that I don’t feel for you the way I do” “Applejack?” “Yeah Rainbow?”
“I love you” “I love you too Rainbow”

Here are the song Lyrics
Out here in the quiet of the night
Beneath the stars, and moon
We both know we've got somethin' on our minds
We won't admit, but it's true

You look at me, I look away

I wanna tell you what I'm feeling,
But I don't know how to start
I wanna tell you, but now
I'm afraid that you might break my heart
Oh why should anything so easy ever
Be so hard to do
I wanna tell you what I'm feeling,
And to say that, I love you

I practice all the things that I would say
Line by line, every word
I tell myself today to take a feet a day
But everytime, I lose my nerve

I look at you, you look away

I wanna tell you what I'm feeling,
But I don't know how to start
I wanna tell you, but now,
I'm afraid that you might break my heart
Oh why should anything so easy ever
Be so hard to do
I wanna tell you what I'm feeling,
And to say that, I love you

Why?
Why do you turn away
It must be, you're afraid like me
I try, but I can't pretend that I,
Don't feel for you, the way I do,
Can't you see

I wanna tell you what I'm feeling,
But I don't know how to start
I wanna tell you, but now,
I'm afraid that you might break my heart
Oh why should anything so easy ever
Be so hard to do,
I wanna tell you what I'm feeling
And to say that, I love you

I wanna tell you what I'm feeling,
But I don't know how to start
I wanna tell you, but now,
I'm afraid that you might break my heart
Oh why should anything so easy ever
Be so hard to do,
I wanna tell you what I'm feeling
And to say that, I love you


That night....Rainbow And Applejack were laying in bed together, but niether dared to venture into what would be a very risky move. Applejack looked over at Rainbow, Who had cuddled up against Her. That's when Applejack silently sang a sweet song to Rainbow just before falling asleep.

This Dream ( from pokemon) Altered Version( to fit pony standards)
EveryPony has a choice in their life
To listen to that voice inside your heart
I know the day may be long
Friends may have come and gone
I will carry on!
Yeah, this dream lasts forever
This dream will never die, This dream will never get old.
We'll try to find the love and hope in our hearts and it's gonna feel strong and wonderful
Yeah, this dream keeps us together no matter what nopony will say about us being together!
This dream with you and I will never end no matter what!
Never let go! Never Say You Can't! Never Say Never! ( Justin bieber Refrence)
We'll be friends like nopony has ever seen!
Because we always will follow this dream in life
Just me and you, Forever and ever
"Rainbow always follow that dream of yours. I love you more than ever ......"Dashie". "

A...Applejack"? "yeah Dash"? Will we ever get to have a family if i follow my dream? Yes you will! Okay but i wanna tell you this! "Ok what Dashie"? "We'll Always stay together"? "Yes Dashie","Yes we will"

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8 Years Later

"AppleHeart!" "RainFlower"! Bed time! But Mommy! " Ponymon is on!" "Ah don't care"! Don't ya'll make me get yah Father up here! The 2 fillies looked at each other, They're father was not a colt, But yet a Mare. But darn she can be really scary! "O....O....O...okay"! "Wait you 2"! "Huh"? They saw there father, She leaned down and kissed both of them on the cheeks and said, "We have some very special news"! "What! What!" "Tell'em AJ"! "Okay" "Ya'll please don't give Your Father here ah hard time"! "Why? Why?" "Beacuse, Ya'll know how we are both Mares?" "Yeah!" Well" Said
Dash here is..." "Aj" " To make a long story short, Your gonna have a Baby brother or sister" "REALLY!!" "Yeah"
"Okay!" "GoodNight you 2!" NIght Mommy!, NIght Daddy!" "Aj... Yeah Dash? Do you Think.. we should get Married?" "Yeah i think it be ah good thing to do so we don't get mistaked for being Single." Okay Aj! We're Gettin married on the first day of Spring!" "Dash! That's a brillant idea!"
The end..... For Now!

Comments ( 17 )

:flutterrage:It wont show the image i put!!!! Why? I did it right!:twilightangry2:

my eyes are bleeding

284722 :rainbowhuh: Huh? Wtf?:rainbowderp:!? And How did you manage to read this without it passing moderation yet?
It's so odd:unsuresweetie:

Interesting idea and i liked it so far... but it was quite difficult to read, once you scrolled through the entire thing you understood the "structure" (at least in my opinion) and why did you put that banner in the story?^^

Sorry, but that was painful to read. Just... no. :ajbemused:

Lesbians. Seriously? Sorry, but I'll have to Dislike. :facehoof:

286122 Just for Them Bein Lesbian!? :pinkiecrazy:Dammit!:flutterrage: I was inspired to do this! Someone inspired me! I Rarley have someone Inspire me to do this kinda thing! and Btw if you don't like lesbian shippings then you didn't have to read it!:rainbowhuh::twilightangry2:

Good story... but.... just... what was your ela grades in school? The grammar...

1. You guys obviously have never read a fan fic before.....When it comes to Rainbow dash & love shes always lesbian...why? because what is classified as the "gay" color? Rainbows.

2.mysterious colt was right, the structure was off making hard to read.

I have mixed feelings about this.... I don't like how its really short and how the structure i off.
but....I didn't hate it.

So I'm just going to leave it at that....no likes, no dislikes. just a comment.

Big mac agrees :eeyup: : E'Yup

286743 Dude, it's a real story now.... i just don't have much time to type up a thounsand word chapter whenever i can. Plus this is my Fourth Fan-Fic Attempt! I am getting better and i am using a thing called.. Trial & Error Dammit! So when i get really lazy on a summer day, i will fix all amy fan-fics on here and write new chapters and whatever other crap i can cram in!:rainbowhuh::facehoof:

286681 Srry, But what does Ela mean? And i'll have you know, i Have really good grades in grammar! But i have Adhd dammit! So my fan-fics will be slightly diffrent! But i am doing really welll with grammar and srry i just type really fast and that's when i make mistakes and i don't see the mistakes until after the fan-fic gets approved and is on the website. So I'm very sorry for the incovinence this fan-fic has provided. will be re-wrote Asasiso! ( Means: As Soon As School Is Out, For me!):scootangel::rainbowderp::heart:

This was a rather good story, I thouroughly enjoyed it and I must say this might be some of your best work I have seen. Good show Ol' Bean, Good show!:pinkiehappy:
286122 I WILL HAVE YOU KNOW THAT IS A VERY MEAN AND OFFENSIVE THING TO SAY, I HAVE 3 LESBIAN FRIENDS AND IM GAY AND WE DONT TOLERATE YOU KINDA PEOPLE!:flutterrage:

:rainbowhuh: This was odd. You could have written it better. :twilightangry2: MAKE IT LONGER, AND WITH MORE SCENES BEFORE THE 8 YEARS LATER!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

I'm made a fic like this only different is called Rainbow Dash's Confession.

585348 There will be more chapter coming sometime, but this is on hiatus until one of my newer fics is completed. So this will continue in let's see september but maybe october but or november cause i'm getting black 2 in october so i will be spamming the game for awhile. So idk when.

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