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The Navy Punk and The Dark Princess

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Timelord47 #1 · Oct 9th, 2013 · 6 · 1 ·

Sound the Gary Stu Alarm!

Kenneth Chase #2 · Oct 9th, 2013 · 1 · ·

*Sirens blaring from distance*
Gary Stu Police incoming.
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Lokimen

Lokimen #3 · Oct 9th, 2013 · · ·

. Chief Petty Officer, US Naval Diver, proud, 'professional', guitarist, and an all around sarcastic ass.

It was a hobby back in highschool, and I occasionally would get gigs at some better known rock clubs.

In place of my usual scarred hand, there was a black hoof, surrounded by dark grey fur with black stripes

I was a dark grey zebra of sorts,... guess you could call it was the same dark grey, but spiked back with green tips, same with my tail. My eyes were no longer bright green but the same toxic green as my hair tips.

"Caustic..... Caustic Flames." I felt pretty clever using my old bands name.

You will be enlisting in my private guard

With a soft giggle that made my hear melt she gave me a pat on the shoulder,

his mare is one cold bitch, and yet everything about her screamed perfection...... I have never been more attracted to a woman before now.

*BOOM!!*
God dammit! You blew up the wish-fulfillment meter! And I just fixed that!

Gherkin

Gherkin #4 · Oct 9th, 2013 · 1 · ·

Oh shit, Gary Stu alert!

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Is... is it dead now?

Ellipsis

Ellipsis #5 · Oct 9th, 2013 · 1 · ·

Gary Stu character AND inability to spell "Prologue" properly? We've got ourselves a winner here.

grim dash #6 · Jun 5th, 2019 · · ·

What the fuck where did that side of lune come from. *shudr*

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