Ponyville's Weeping Angel

The Doctor ends up in Ponyville for the first time and as he has arrived, one of his most feared enemies follow, a weeping angel.

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Chapter 1 · 2nd Mar 2012 · 870 words
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Chapter 2 · 2nd Mar 2012 · 733 words
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Chapter 3 · 2nd Mar 2012 · 931 words
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Chapter 4 · 2nd Mar 2012 · 890 words
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Chapter 5 · 4th Mar 2012 · 1,735 words
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Sorren

Sorren #1 · Mar 2nd, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

it's kinna interesting. Not to dash hopes and all but generally referening the internet in a story about ponies. Making them to really seem an elemtent of fiction inside a fictional story is kind of a put off. it's good. I just wouldnt have recommended the "internet meme" reference.

Mrantefjant

Mrantefjant #2 · Mar 3rd, 2012 · · · Chapter 2 ·

Nice twist with granny there in the end!
But, that must mean that her parents named here that on purpuse, but that must mean she would meet herself, and that must mean that Dicord already had sent back grandma, cuse other vice we would not get Apple Jack.......................................

MaxKodan

MaxKodan #3 · Mar 3rd, 2012 · · · Chapter 4 ·

Gah, figures, when I come up with this idea and plan to make it a sequel to my current story, someone else snatches up the site's Angel cherry <<;. Still gonna do it though...Eventually...

Also: The space time continuum is fun to play with, isn't it? Like silly putty.

Swokk