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TimeRarity64


I prefer writing and reading original stuff, with a sinful taste to abnormality, darling. :raritywink:

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An add on to The Cold Shadow, the story centers around with Rarity (First Person/Narration), describing the events after the strange incident with Twilight. Foals are going missing and Rarity does whatever she can to survive from not only the collapsing structure of her business, but also with her sister, Sweetie Belle, doing whatever it takes to stay alive. But a strange visit from a stranger changes that, and horror ensures on the two.

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I liked it, especially after having played Story of Blanks. :pinkiecrazy: I feel that it had a nice build up of suspense that lead to the ending. And the note at the end, awesome. I plan to read this on my YouTube, if that is alright with you. I'll give you credit for the story and have a link here.

However, there were some grammatical errors I noticed while reading, and some of the wording confused me a bit, like the line, "They made have been behind those steel doors, while we remained unanswered from them why, but they remained especial.". I think T is a good rating, not that much graphic of detail to make it a M. :raritywink:

3322001I am glad you liked it, and thank you for pointing out that error. I will see to fix it today. Now, if you do plan on reading this, by all means, go ahead. I really do not mind and I am flattered at the fact of it too.

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