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    FredMSloniker's Stories (5)

    • The Monster Mash
      Six characters. Six encounters with the supernatural. Happy Nightmare Night.

      44,406 words · 15,091 views · 447 likes · 7 dislikes
    • The Pantheon of Harmony
      Twilight Sparkle and her friends must bring the magic of friendship to a whole new world.
      11,445 words · 4,124 views · 208 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Worlds Beyond
      Ponies journey to the stars... but the galaxy is a dangerous place.
      15,993 words · 783 views · 41 likes · 0 dislikes
    • In Which A Pony Gets Diabetes
      ...and it's not the end of the world.
      1,173 words · 858 views · 47 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Special Friends
      1,811 words · 1,443 views · 63 likes · 4 dislikes

    The alien probe that crash-landed in Fluttershy's yard contained plans for a spacecraft and directions to the sender's home planet.  The ponies of Equestria eagerly accepted the invitation.  But the galaxy is a dangerous place, and darker than they know...

    First Published
    1st Mar 2012
    Last Modified
    11th Mar 2012

    Comments ( 19 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 67w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Wow, this is like watching a movie so far. Epic and well written. Tracked!

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 67w, 5d ago · · ·
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    So, just finished reading it and I have to say that this is a very promising story and I hope every chapter to follow is as cinamatic and exciting as this one was. Bravo.

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 67w, 5d ago · · ·
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    This awesome! Tracking!

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 67w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I'm at a loss for words at how amazing this is.

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 67w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Getting some major Homeworld vibes from this fic.:rainbowkiss:  Hopefully not in the "Equestria is burning" way.

    Consider it tracked.

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 67w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Nice story:pinkiehappy:

    Tracked, liked and favourited. :twilightsmile:

    Now when's the next chapter coming out?

    Nox
    #7 · Chapter 1 · 67w, 4d ago · · ·
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    HOLY! This is...I mean...:rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

    tracked/thumbs-up/comment triple combo!

    Keep this up, there is SO much potential to this...

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I am the prereader to this story. I help!:trollestia:

    #9 · Chapter 2 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    All I can say is, "wow". Another great installment of this fantastic story. Kudos.

    #10 · Chapter 2 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    :pinkiegasp: SH:fluttercry:T JUST GOT REAL AND CRANKED TO ELEVEN

    #11 · Chapter 2 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I enjoy this story, hope the next chapter won't take a month like some other fanfics I follow.... and I find your choice for a FTL drive kinda neat, I think it's the first or second time that I read about a drive that works by stretching indiviual molecules to FTL speeds and I can see how it may affect future escape attempts..... one of the non-written rules of space based science-fiction is that ALL escape attempts through light-speed require some time where the vessel is highly vulnerable and.... lets just say that your drive concept seems vulnerable as if some matter is destroyed before it transits, it would probably have a massive effect on the remainder of the ship.... why is the sci-fi geek in me still rambling..

    Good story bro, keep it up.

    #12 · Chapter 2 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>304010

    So am I. Nice to meet you.

    #13 · Chapter 2 · 65w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Excepts from my email:

    Milo wrote:


    PS. Craterfist and Bronymaster are bragging about being prereaders for your story in the comment thread, and I'm feeling kinda left out.  Mind letting 'em know I exist?


    I wrote:


    In what way?  Like, posting to the thread saying 'a prereader named Milo who doesn't have an account on FIMFiction is feeling left out of the ego-boost brigade', or...?


    Milo wrote:


    Yeah, pretty much ;)


    So... okay then.  Hope that helps! :twilightsheepish:

    #14 · Chapter 2 · 64w, 3d ago · · ·
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    The description makes me think I know the premise of the story... but no matter what, I'm gonna read it. Lots of great comments and not a single thumbs down! (Trolls obviously haven't found it yet. Lets take a moment to give thanks...) XD

    Can't wait to read it, but what I do is download the txt file to read later, so I'll get back to you with a... I'm not sure if I can call it a "review" or a "comment". It might be both... sort of... depending on my mood...

    Keep writing! :twilightsmile:

    #15 · Chapter 2 · 63w, 6d ago · · ·
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    And so the ponies flee their Homeworld seeking help to liberate lost world the ponies travel All alone in the night

    For does one add something to favioties on this site

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 57w, 3d ago · · ·
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    test-test

    #17 · Chapter 2 · 55w, 23h ago · · ·
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    Why do I get Prometheus vibes from this? :twilightoops:

    #18 · Chapter 2 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I'm getting some Homeworld vibes from this myself! And they're AWESOME.

    This is an interesting story. First ponies and sci fi one I've seen that caught my interesting, and one I will gladly keep an eye on it.

    #19 · Chapter 2 · 46w, 20h ago · · ·
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    Lots of parallels with Robotech/Macross, Space Battleship Yamato... And let's not forget Pinkie's "Dune" reference! :pinkiehappy: This is awesome in *so many ways*.

    And the "underside of Equestria"?! :twilightsheepish: I don't know if that's a Discworld reference or not, but either way it's great for a story to not just assume that the magical land of Equestria is a normal planet, even in something SF-based!

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