'Twas the darkest night you've never seen.
Our nightmares had escaped our dreams.
As we faced our terrors, we thought that we were done.
And we feared we would not live to see the rising sun.
It seemed certain that we would fall.
And that we soon would loose it all.
When fear and darkness ruled the land, and ponies ran and hid,
While they had given up all hope, what do you think I did?
I laughed.
I laughed like I never had before.
My terrors stopped, and I laughed more.
'Twas then, amid the shadows' screams,
That I had dared again to dream.
I laughed away my fears,
The darkness, and my tears.
I laughed until the dark turned light,
My soul escaped that darkest night.
And when I found that I'd been freed,
I turned to help those sill in need.
I taught them how to laugh and grin
To overcome the dark within.
And as they did, the dark without
Vanished while we pranced about.
And soon the sun did rise again,
And not just on the horizon.
I've still not stopped, and through the years
I've conquered all my deepest fears.
Now one last laugh, I soon will share,
When Death himself comes for this mare.
Don't mourn for me, just laugh on.
Spread smiles with a happy song.
And when the shadows do draw nigh,
Remember the laugh of your Granny Pie.
Well, just as promised, I read your poems. all I can say is this:images.wikia.com/morph-society-4real/images/a/a9/Bravo_Bravo.gif
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You sir have talent! I saw only one or two places where you were lacking in flow, and those were so miniscule that I don't even think they are worth mentioning.
there were also a few places where there were typos, but again nothing too big to detract from the poems.
Bravo! Bravo I say!
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Now how did that happen? I suspect that after writing that poem my brain refused to acknowledge the existence of the letter P for several hours, so extensive proofreading never really happened
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I got gifs!
And thank you very much. I'm glad you've enjoyed these.
3285401 that picture scared me so bad i may never go fishing again
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I just googled "Pinkie Pike" to see what get. I was thinking of Pinkie with one of these pikes, but instead I got...that.
But hey, it could be worse.