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UmemotoJiro
I'm not a writer these are more of plans for animations that I want to do (put probably won't)
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I feel bad for the author. It looks like he spent alot of time on this then look at dem dislikes. xD
Granted I haven't even read it yet lol. Probably won't.
Time for Spike to write his resignation letter and exchange that negligent cunt for friends who give a shit about him.
3302247 I don't think the author inserted enough effort, as already stated in the description.
If he did, at least change the error on the title, even if he already submitted the story like so in DeviantArt.
Spike is Ponyvilles most eligible bachelor, big mac with cheerlie.
You should polish this up a bit, the idea isn't awful :)
I admit, it's not bad, but like Terego said, you need to polish this.
Why don't you find an editor and ask him to help?
Mac has really gotten himself into it, w/o even trying....
And I can see that you are going with the idea that Big Mac and Applejack are Bloom's biological parents.....hmm...
You really need to find a editor at least. This entire thing looks like a first draft. Also, if you are going to have it as a clopfic, all of them should have some explicity with all of the potential suitors, not just your apparent favorite, otherwise, you can use the Teen rating with a sex tag and call it implied. It's for the sake of some objectivity.
Also, with the Spike and Applebloom tags, if they are just a mentioning glance, they don't need to be tagged; the tags are there to specify the main characters in a story. Here you can use the Big Mac tag, as well as the Mane 6 tag, since you are creating a harem, but you don't need either the Spike or the Apple Bloom tags unless they are also main characters in your story. Just mentioning them does not warrant a tag. You only have a max of 5 tags you can use, so choose wisely in the future.
LOL, Twilight Apple; someone's already planning a wedding.
ERMAGERD RAPE!
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Also,
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lol, I like this story; it's raunchy in a very funny way - that poor bastard made the mistake of even talking to a woman, and now he has to deal with all of this crazy shit
I'm honestly not sure why this story got so many dislikes. There are flaws and the subject matter does objectify both genders, afterall the main six come off as being merely sex crazed and at times kinda bimbo-ish. Although I believe that the following chapters will try to give them more character as it moves away from sex and more into the pursuit of a relationship.
As for Mac, he comes across as being incredibly submissive, being more than willing to just sit there and obediently do as he is told, as well as being incredibly forgiving given that he didn't freak out about being drugged and raped. I will admit that the fantasy of having a woman force herself on myself is appealing, if it actually happened I would most likely be incredibly distressed and downright panicked if a woman actually tranquillised and tied me up. The fact remains that this story doesn't do either gender any favours, but that's okay.
Stories like these are a guilty pleasure, they contain themes that I frankly would find distressing in real life, but in fiction they are both amusing and entertaining. So, I gave a like and hope that you will update soon.
You mean Winona?
Thank you for this story! I really like it.
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Nope. Spike is sissy girl. His place in the "friend zone"
Applebloom turned out fine....
mother of god... IT ALL MAKES SENSE NOW.
Well it looks like its true what they say... the family that sleeps together
Keeps together
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEYUUUUP
I have to say people are underrating this story. Yes it has flaws and just about every story does. The story line is good it's just feels like it's missing some details is all. I'm interested in where this story can lead to.
Also, this image comes to mind; the awkward moment in the middle of town, after the fact that she raped him and what not.
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lol.
Seriously, you need to continue this; right now. Don't listen to those 40+ stupid assholes that downvoted this - instead, you should listen to the 40+ of us
stupid assholesloyal readers that actually upvoted it. Let that be your motivation and... hold on, I just insulted myself - I need to fix that real quick... There we go; anyways, let that be your motivation and get back to making new chapters!3511527 Hoo, ya damn right !
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Run BITCH RUUUUUUUUUUUN!!!!!!!!!!!!
Holy shit friend I look away for a minute and you added seven stories now I will go to sleep late now.
I loved Mac's line near the end it was funny as Hell.
Mommy? As in that Tumblr?
... Creepy, yet satisfying...
lol
LOL WHAT?
Again, this shit gets really creepy. You make me laugh!
... And so it ends. I am both amused and disturbed by this entire story, and thus my mood is adequate. May God have mercy upon us all; I think that you should very rightly make a sequel just for the hell of it, and may the lulz guide you as they are want to.
Drunk Celestia is scary
Oh sweet Celestia. wtf did I just read!
... 
WOOOOOOooooooow.
Pinkie, why do you have to brake the forth wall?
Because....
...Pinkie!
Sorry. bye.
Big Mac, you know you're f**ked, right?
as said before. BM, you're f**ked.
WTFWTFWTF
0_0
Little Miss Rairty anypony?
...I have nothing two say
...
eeyup:
wow. just, wow
Is it scary that I read Celestias letter in the drunk Molestia voice?
What can I say ? Two things. About story and about downvoters. About story: This story is excellent!
About downvoters:They're just a bunch of freaking bastards.
Of course, this text has a few problems (especially with grammar), but thanks to the great and funny plot, these shortcomings are not so noticeable. I am glad to hear that this story will have a sequels and I already like their titles. Except for this title - "Mac's multiverse gender bender adventure" . I don't like all this stuff with rule 63 ... I agree with Captain unstoppable about the fact that Big Mac is MLPverse Chuck Norris and this why...https://i.chzbgr.com/maxW500/4476178944/h9F7E4C1F/
what the fuck have i read so far?
Lol mac hit that FOUR SCOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE SWEAT ASS COME TO MEH
Lol wonder why applejack so silent