Do we really have to die? Are we then forced to go to one of two extremely different places there after? Or, if we believe enough, want it enough, then maybe we can be given a choice in it all. Well I believed in more, and I got more, so much more.
So far so good, I laughed at the last scene, although the 'god' scene could use some looking over for grammar and such, which I of course would be happy to do for you!
I have to say,
"Oh Shit!" Would've been the only thing I could've processed at the time.
Very well written, and seems to be well thought out. Nice work.
So far so good, I laughed at the last scene, although the 'god' scene could use some looking over for grammar and such, which I of course would be happy to do for you!
Onto the next chapter!!