The Heat of Her Prime

MA Melody of Heat
MLP: FiM
Romance
Slice of Life
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A year after her shameful romp with Button's teacher, a band concert for her darling little colt is an unlikely place for an old flame to flare up. Will Button's mother stay faithful to her husband, sitting right beside her?
Fetish
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Comment posted by Mr Pones deleted Sep 28th, 2013

Sille

Sille #2 · Sep 28th, 2013 · 5 · 16 ·

"Button's mom should really be on the list of characters."

Uh, nope. She's an OC. Case closed.

Lord of Nothing

Lord of Nothing #3 · Sep 28th, 2013 · · ·

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No disrespect, but why come to a story just to say you'll pass it by? This sounds stupid while I'm typing this out, so hopefully it'll read better for you.

Mr Pones

Mr Pones #4 · Sep 28th, 2013 · · ·

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It read fine, don't worry.

I did read part of it, and from that gleaned my observation about the author's writing. I guess I should probably delete that comment, as it lends nothing to the author.

Lord of Nothing

Lord of Nothing #5 · Sep 28th, 2013 · · ·

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Thank God that read well, but you didn't have to delete your comment.

Kabuto901

Kabuto901 #6 · Sep 28th, 2013 · 3 · ·

Good story but I feel sorry for Silver Lance though

dermuffinmeister

dermuffinmeister #7 · Sep 28th, 2013 · 6 · 3 ·

3268006 Spike is a cunt and you're no fun.

Solaris

Solaris #8 · Sep 29th, 2013 · 1 · 1 ·

3271969
Spike dragon best dragon.

dermuffinmeister

dermuffinmeister #9 · Sep 30th, 2013 · · ·

3276524 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mjQZNkiY7ds

HD Lifeline

HD Lifeline #10 · Oct 1st, 2013 · · ·

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I was thinking the same...the whole 'Button's teacher' thing kinda ruined the entirity of the story for me. And the fact that she was comparing someone she was one-night-standing with with her husband...for some reason that just crosses the line, in my opinion.

Only thing really good about the story is the grammar. I mean, Button's mom is made out to look like a bit of a slut in this story...maybe I'm getting into depth about that, but I really don't give a fuck. The more I think about it, I feel that Milano isn't this sort of character, and she's written wrongly in this story. I dunno. I'm neutral on it. All we've seen is like, 20 seconds of her at most in the video on YouTube, so I'm just not gonna rate this up or down.

Kabuto901

Kabuto901 #11 · Oct 1st, 2013 · · ·

3283450 The story was good but I would prefer if she was divorced

Solaris

Solaris #12 · Oct 1st, 2013 · 1 · ·

3282149 http://youtu.be/ssC77hapv0g?t=8s

dermuffinmeister

dermuffinmeister #13 · Oct 2nd, 2013 · · ·

3283450 very good input, and for the most part, I concur. I was having troubles pinning her down as a pony, but I was thinking of her as 25-28, so still young enough to have those younger urges.

HD Lifeline

HD Lifeline #14 · Oct 2nd, 2013 · · ·

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Yeah, single and being turned on would've sated my general feelings about the whole relationship shenanigans, I suppose.

3288850
I suppose I can see where you're coming from from that...but that also means that she can't have been married for too long, which would actually cross against her cutie mark, which is parenting. Bad parenting would be a compatibility with divorce...but once again, I'm probably over-describing everything and going into too much depth. I like it, but I don't. Simple.

Kabuto901

Kabuto901 #15 · Oct 2nd, 2013 · · ·

3289670 If she was devorced I wouldn't feel sorry for Silver Lance,then I would have enjoyed this fic more.

dermuffinmeister

dermuffinmeister #16 · Oct 2nd, 2013 · · ·

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Kinda makes you think, huh? If this is happening while Lance is away, what kind of crazy adventures could the stallion be getting into miles and miles away?