What the hell happened to Twilight!? Did she morph into an alien? replygif.net/i/253.gif Seriously, that picture freaks me the fuck out!
On a side note, I'd like to see you try to make your chapters a little bigger if possible, apart from that, this was nice. I'm going to have trouble sleeping though.
So if Crowley format continues as normal, the next chapter is the clop and the one after is the finale. Sucks that this is ending so soon but I'm glad we revisited this story.
Now... how about Rainbow Dash and anonymous weather pegasus?
Now that's a justified fear, orcas are dicks. Had it been a baleen whale or a whale shark that'd be one thing but orcas would eat you as soon as a shark would (which is not to say often but it's a possibility).
I wonder... what would happen if shining armor and cadence heard twilight with us (the character who in this story, is addressed as you) and her screaming... what would happen?
“I saw the whale swimming towards me again. It must’ve thought I was a stray fish or some plankton or something. If I hadn’t have swam out of the way in time it would’ve…”
NEW CHAPTER YAY
That explains a bit but, eh, Twilight's leg in the picture... Looks way too skinny and awkward... But that's probably just me NOW FOR TEH CLOP
Hooyah new chapter!
What the hell happened to Twilight!? Did she morph into an alien?
replygif.net/i/253.gif
Seriously, that picture freaks me the fuck out!
On a side note, I'd like to see you try to make your chapters a little bigger if possible, apart from that, this was nice. I'm going to have trouble sleeping though.
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It's supposed to be Twilight's foreleg reaching reaching outwards, but perspective derps it, kinda. Might change it later.
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This chapter was initally supposed to be combined with the previous one, but I seperated them for easier reader digestion.
3915901 Eh, I'd combine them. It would only be 2000 words, still easy to read.
3915854 Finally I've found you!
Aw... time to find the whale and thank him. Or, most likely, panic and run again.
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It's not just you. Twilight does seem like she needs to eat properly.
So if Crowley format continues as normal, the next chapter is the clop and the one after is the finale. Sucks that this is ending so soon but I'm glad we revisited this story.
Now... how about Rainbow Dash and anonymous weather pegasus?
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So what do you want, a cookie?
3916174 What flavor?
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No, we need Rarity sequel! Rainbow already got a sequel, now so did Twilight! RARITY MUST RETUUURN!!!
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Cookie flavour
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Rarity? What's that? Some kind of hair care product?
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Actually, I believe there is a line of hair gloss called Rarity in Europe...
3916183 hmmm why not...
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Hmm... I get the feeling that Crowley might be annoyed from all of these pointless comments on his story...
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They should import that. I'd use it.
3916199 Maybe... oh well
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Hee hee hee... yeah... ending the story soon... sure... (steeples fingers, shifty eyes)
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You could continue it forever. I'd be OK with that.
3916227 Another 20 chapters sounds good.
Now that's a justified fear, orcas are dicks. Had it been a baleen whale or a whale shark that'd be one thing but orcas would eat you as soon as a shark would (which is not to say often but it's a possibility).
It begins...
*Laughs hysterically*
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*clears throat*
I-I mean...
ಠuಠ Bueno.
Orcas are dolphins. How can anyone still not know that?
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they are also Killer whales
I wonder... what would happen if shining armor and cadence heard twilight with us (the character who in this story, is addressed as you) and her screaming... what would happen?
Um...Orcas (Killer Whales) are carnivores and are nicknamed "Wolves of the Sea" and they eat seals, other whales, sharks, sometimes people, penguins and damn near anything else they can get catch. The protagonist was just lucky to get away from the damn thing.
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Boot to the head.
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Hmm. You know what, I may have to change that then. Cough.
3930460 Ain't that a kick in the head?
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No.
It seems your special talent isn't drawing
Okay hermano
MUCHO MUU BUENO BRODY
MUVHO MUY BUENO
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i dont know why people are complaining about the picture i find it cute and sexy