I do wish you'd stop using images in your story to illustrate a point. A good story doesn't need pictures if you've taken the time to describe what's happening
The illustrations add a cute factor to the story. I like them. The one with Cadence is excellent, however, although I liked the Twilight one, I feel it would've had more effect at the end with Her and the tear. I also like the fade effect on the images. :^D
3859178 I could have spent two minutes describing the ink on Cadance or Twilight's reaction with words, yes.
Instead, I took ten to fifteen minutes making the image of Cadance (even going as far as editing her actual expression), and around twenty editing the goggles (and manually adding the lenses) on Twilight. Because I wanted the pictures to tell the story, not as a reading-aid, but as that extra bit of flair.
I don't add images because I need to illustrate a point. I add them because I want to.
Also, geez, I'm Crowley! It's tradition! Wouldn't be a Crowley fic without images! Wait until you see the massive one I have coming up for this fic WHOOPS SPOILERS
Bubble head charm? Are you just ripping off Harry Potter now? But seriously, it would be a good idea to add some sort of magically induced breathing aid, since most of the fun will be happening underwater.
3865071 What's with all of the hostility you people are giving me? I just stated my opinion and a suggestion, I meant no offence to the author and wasn't trying to be rude or hateful.
3865071 3865120 Now now, it's fair that Bromiliad stated his opinions, as he is perfectly free to do so. And I understand that Kagitaar is sticking up for me, which I appreciate. Either way, I really don't want any hostilities between fellow readers; we have enought drama in this fandom as it is.
Twilight Sparkle whispers a few ideas in your ear. A few suggestions. A few positions. To sum it up in two words? Aquatic intimacy. You agree with every little thing she suggests.
I do wish you'd stop using images in your story to illustrate a point. A good story doesn't need pictures if you've taken the time to describe what's happening
The illustrations add a cute factor to the story. I like them. The one with Cadence is excellent, however, although I liked the Twilight one, I feel it would've had more effect at the end with Her and the tear. I also like the fade effect on the images. :^D
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I could have spent two minutes describing the ink on Cadance or Twilight's reaction with words, yes.
Instead, I took ten to fifteen minutes making the image of Cadance (even going as far as editing her actual expression), and around twenty editing the goggles (and manually adding the lenses) on Twilight. Because I wanted the pictures to tell the story, not as a reading-aid, but as that extra bit of flair.
I don't add images because I need to illustrate a point. I add them because I want to.
Also, geez, I'm Crowley! It's tradition! Wouldn't be a Crowley fic without images!
Wait until you see the massive one I have coming up for this ficWHOOPS SPOILERSWell... shit. So is 'my' name Captain Ahab or something?
Also another shit... 'I' just done fucked up with Twilight... in front of her brother.
Wonder what will be put on my grave stone...
Bubble head charm? Are you just ripping off Harry Potter now? But seriously, it would be a good idea to add some sort of magically induced breathing aid, since most of the fun will be happening underwater.
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The pictures are a Crowley staple, and I hope he never stops using them.
I just...
I lost my shit right there.
*See's Cadence's face*
Hmmm, that line seems awfully familiar...
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Fuck "I'm" stupid.
Get my shit together!
Oh god, Cadence's face. It's like Jigglypuff's microphone/marker shtick all over again...
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What a perfect name for a prickly person who likes invading others's spaces.
3865071 What's with all of the hostility you people are giving me? I just stated my opinion and a suggestion, I meant no offence to the author and wasn't trying to be rude or hateful.
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Now now, it's fair that Bromiliad stated his opinions, as he is perfectly free to do so. And I understand that Kagitaar is sticking up for me, which I appreciate. Either way, I really don't want any hostilities between fellow readers; we have enought drama in this fandom as it is.
Now kiss and make up.
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Meh, just annoyed enough to come up with a good quip, don't care to go beyond that.
I thought that when you play tic tac toe, when you win you put a line through your three symbols.
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Drunkness begets forgetfulness, that's my excuse! But what you should really be asking is... who were you playing tic-tac-toe with!?
3871720 The sea monster
Oh I see, my parents were eaten by whales.
twilight shold have just thrown me into the water and say YOUR GONNA SWIN WHETHER YOU LIKE IT OR NOT would be alright with me :/
Bow Chicka wow wow....
Don't do it. Salt water chafes