Multiple fractures, contusions, internal bleeding; hell I was lucky enough to make it to the field hospital. I was even luckier to make it to surgery. I spent most of my time under the knife or in a state of drugged limbo. I can’t quite recall the conversation I had with Captain Gordon, but I vaguely remember placing the letter in his hand and making a vague suggestion to send it to Twi. I was told that the doctors had to keep reassuring me that Sam made it out all right, because I demanded to know his condition. That was a difficult time. There were many times where I didn’t know if I was going to make it or not. It was by a miracle that I’m alive. I even spent most the flight back to the state drugged up. Shortest flight I’ve ever had by far.
Spent the whole day trying to navigate the city with a cane, harder than you think. I didn’t want to call a cab, I needed to walk and help my leg heal. Probably should’ve taken a cab. Walking across intersections is a lot slower going. Everyone is trying to help. Especially with a broken left arm. Yet, all I could think about was getting to her. I called multiple times, my apartment, yet no answer. I called her cell phone, which also resulted in no answer. Worried was an understatement at that point. So, after all that, I finally arrive back that the apartment, late and tired. I notice the opened envelope near the door, a sigh, it’s anyone’s guess about how she reacted, but I can only guess it wasn’t good. Regretfully, I wish I didn’t send the letters.
I didn’t know if or when Twi would return. So I wrote a note on the mail, seeing as she did pick up the mail, might as well. Pouring myself a shot, I walked into the bedroom. Lowering myself onto the edge of the bed, somehow I just couldn’t believe I made it back and that everyone else did too. Somehow, I made it. And now it’s over, over for me at least. I chuckle, slamming the shot down. It burns on its way down, making me cringe a bit. Ugh, I haven’t had a good drink in ages. I rub my face with my good hand. I’m just glad to be home, but it won’t be home till I have Twi in my arms, well, arm.
I don’t know how long it was till heard the door unlock and open. Here we go, I thought as I grabbed my cane. Limping into the living room, I saw her, reading the note. Focused completely on the note. She was shaking a bit. And then I was there, standing in front of her.
“Hey the-,” was all I got out before I felt her palm strike my face. I was stunned, and in wonder of what I did wrong.
“You…you,” she was starting to hyperventilate. “You… you…” I recovered a bit, then looked at her, but by then she was already wrapped tight around me.
“Ow, ow, ow. Twi, my arm, my arm!”
“Oh, I’m sorry,” she stepped back; putting her hand my arm. She choked on a tear. “I’m just extremely joyful to see you back, alive.”
“There has been a few times where I didn’t think that was possible. I’m lucky I made it out of the sandbox.”
She shuttered a bit, talking in between sobs. “I know. I saw how you looked on the news. I didn’t want to believe it. I woke up every day, with a hope that you would walk through that door as if nothing even happened.” Looking up at me, “but you’re here now.”
“Yes, that I am. Here, for good. I’ll probably be discharged, either medically and/or honorably. From there, the sky is the limit.”
She placed her hand on my cheek, gently rubbing it. Leaning towards me, she placed a soft kiss on my lips. “You’re lucky I have a weakness to a man in uniform.”
I chuckle a bit. “I guess I’m just lucky to have found you first then. Because I don’t know where I would be without you. Probably not here, that’s for sure.” I looked her in the eyes and smiled. “Love is a powerful drive to stay alive. That was my only drive, to be here again, with you, in your arms again.”
Twi smiled in happiness, her eyes welling up with more tears, “You didn’t have to say that,” She reached into her pocket and pulled out some paper. And then I noticed, the letter I wrote, my supposed last letter. “Twilight, I love you.” She read, and then looked at me. “And you need to know something as well. I love you too.” She put the letter down and gently hugged me. And that’s how we stood for a while, till she kissed me on the cheek. “So, what happens now?”
“Right now is the beginning of forever. Forever with you. How does that sound?”
She smiled, her tears long gone. She kissed me, full on lips. “I think I wouldn’t have it any other way.”
That was one nice story you got there Got me sad, but happy at the same time
Brohug, anybrony?
great read, just break up the walls of text, makes it easier on the eyes rather than looking at a giant single form of words.
So good i had to try hard not to get emotional during this.
Awesome story, It was moving and different from most stories out there. Amazing job.
so you're HERE too? Well gee, there's just no getting away. Nice story, yeah, i liked it. good job.
That was just touching, THE best story I've read on fimfiction, I hope you write more like this.
a story with an emotional background good work sir :3 made we tear up in the letters bit :)
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Brohoof. Very moving and emotional. I loved it! I definitely look forward to more work from you!
that was so amazing........ i loved it... new chapters soon?
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I cannot up vote enough. 5 stars, upvote, like, 10/10 or whatever, it isn't enough. That was beautiful. I swore i wouldn't cry! Manly tears have been shed. Oh hell, they weren't manly, they were thick, and emotional, and I don't care!
my god.... how do you not have more views or comments. i thought this was a great story and it deserves more attention.
This is...okay. I wouldn't call it "The Greatest Story Ever" as I've seen people say, but it was good none the less.
270940 Um.. put together at once, it was 22 pages long. I thought it would be an easier read if it was broken down, that's all. Thank you for the feedback ^^
Discription got me hooked. Will read and give you my impression. So far its promising.
Just followed your ponythread link. I agree with clonetrooperkev, combine the chapters into at least the 2,000 range.
Absolutely amazing I wish this story didn't end I would love to hear what happened next like marriage or something like that
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that i can do ^^ eventually
When I first started reading this I had my doubts, I have seen a lot of soldier stories that were terrible and often completely disrespectful to the troops. I However as I read your story I found myself immersed in your story, hoping things would work out just fine. You did a good job at accurately portraying the warrior accurately. Did you serve or do you have a relative or friend that served? There were a few grammatical errors here and there but it didn't ruin the story. Overall I think this is in my top three favorite stories I have read. I would recommend this to a lot of my friends. I am hoping that you will continue writing, be a shame to see some good talent go to waste.
Simply, Fu**ing Genious!!!!
270986 *brohug*
i've found stories like this are often th' most well-written and touching things i have ever read. this is no exception. three thumbs up my good man.
Fantastic story, just wonderful.
Wow... This story was simply stunning. The emotion put into this... Words do not describe... wait, this is a story.. made of words...
Anyway, The grammar issues would have made this story not worth the read, but then you just kept my attention with even more amazing writing.
This story was amazing, and humbling.
That was one of the best fanfics I've ever read, and not in equestria too thats cool.
Whoa, I could have sworn that clock said 8 PM just a moment ago...
Dear friend, I would hug you for making this. (I say would because it would look awkward hugging a computer) this is why I love this fandom, the endless creativity and support
I've seen war in Equestria and Soldiers making it into Equestria somehow. However, i have never seen a humanized pony in the real world with a soldier. Well done, other than the oddly done chapters, I have no complaints. Great job, had me captivated the whole time.
I'll be honest, at the start I wasn't sure about this Fic. You need to unjumble the first few chapters, it's all sort of blocky.
But when and after Twilight and Toby met up the structure became a lot better. You managed to put a lot of emotion in your story, which is something many writers have trouble doing.
You have a gift, use it wisely.
Bro, this was just beautiful.
Lets hear it for the Air Force! I cant wait for basic training so i can start serving the country that has served me.
Hoozah! The soldier gets the girl, and all is right with the world. I wonder if she knows he watches MLP yet...
Heza...Zawah..Habujaba...WHUT.
Why you take an emotional rollercoaster and throw it off a cliff?! Why you make me feel like that?!
WAI?!
Hoorah. My dad was former Air Force and my uncle was an Army Major.
Glad it works out for the best in this story.
Great story, I hope there's an epilogue, or something that gives closure on the MLP love this soldier has/had and if Twilight is well or just a damn near copy of her.
Great story though
I'm a thirteen-year-old pegasister who read this fanfiction at 10 p.m on a school night.
You sir, deserve a brohoof. /)
*bawling my eyes out*D'AWWWWWWWW! Wonderful story!no doubt I will have a dream about this. It's 12:36 AM now. Damn you school...272852 lol I feel ya. Thank celestia I had my tests yesterday.
Magnifico. Beautiful. Great work and definitely deserve praise.
Thank you. The amount this touched my heart cannot be simply written in words. This was truely buitiful, sad, poetic and truefull. My older brother died a little less than a year ago, risking his life to save his squadrent bye covering a IED with his body. He was the one who turned me into who I am now ( brony included ). The connections in this community drive me to manly tears.Again thank you 270986 As for you, brohug.
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Brohug accepted.
This was a wonderful story. I wish I could meet someone like the Twilight in this story. A tip of my hat for a well done touching story. And yes, I realise I ended every sentence in this paragraph with 'story'.
Out-bucking standing. Thank you to all those who have served us! theauthorsapprentice.files.wordpress.com/2011/03/rainbow-dash-salutes-america.jpg
HNNNNNNNG my Diabeetus!
Wow this was very good, even if it had very little to do with ponies,I don't care
Wonderful, just plain wonderful. A love story at it's best. Thank you so much!
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Amen to that brother.
Great. Story. I loved it. I just thought that it was a little weird that he watched the show, and then met a girl named Twilight Sparkle, who looked like Twilight from the show, and didn't notice or at least didn't show that he noticed.
D'aww. So sweet. HUGZ 4 EVERYPONY!
270986 BROHUG!! *Bear hug*
272852>>272971 Brony in University behind on an assignment reading this on a school night. IM TARDY!! Twilight would be disappointed in my habits as a student.
This was a great fic with a great story and lots of emotion. I usually avoid humanized fics like the plague but I loved this and this will go on my "Best fic list" along with FO:E and "My Little Dashie".
My theory about Twi going to earth and humanizing herself still stands though I have no supporting reason to do so.
Sequel?
*Begins to chant* Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!
This was amazing! I kinda liked the chapter set up in my opinion, as weird as that sounds.
Just earlier today I took a Chem test on campus and did pretty horrible on it (the irony: I'm majoring in Chemistry). Nice to read this and get my moral back up!
Thank you for writing this!
(editing note: There are occasions where there is a short word/phrase that is missing from a sentence here and there. Although I was still able to easily understand what you meant to say, it would be nice to read without having to decode sentences even rarely. That all said, AWESOME! )