With a lot of legal charges hanging over his head, Spike has two weeks to 'Convince' a jury of mares that he is, indeed, innocent of all charges. He's got a lot of work ahead of him
I know it isn't part of the canon, but it could be... Spike's such a good guy he helped a crazy mare back to sanity (they don't have to say how exactly)
Maybe it can be made canon? Have spike visit after the trial? She would be the only one he can go back to for fear that he could get in trouble for tampering with the jurors.
Just a thought.
Also adequate supplement for the wait between chapters. I look forward to the rest.
Screw Loose should temporarily be called Screw Tight now, if anything. I believe that is the first time that I have actually seen a story where someone has been literally screwed straight.
At this point, I hope it's permananent!! Spike, you stud, you!
That was 100% original gold! Awesome job with that whole chapter, and Spike saying Twilight's name in his sleep while pitching a tent? It was bound to happen sooner or later.
Well I guess we all know what this means: Spike got the "Magic Sticks"
This was a great chapter i was laughing as well as found it really enjoyable. I would love to see you write a story about Spike x Screw Loose as well. People (including myself) would love to see Spike taking care of the "Dog" Mare and then her switching between dog and pony. It would be a hit lol. Anyway keep up the great work. Can't wait for your next update.
What a fun chapter! Why the hell is everyone praising the last line, though? We were all thinking "he fucked her sane" and then you had to go and deprive us of the opportunity to say it in the comments. If you ask me, Screwy's bark following, "Y-You can SPEAK!?" was the winning zinger.
That was ... pretty skeevy. The fact that you obviously realize that, from what you stated in the Author's Note, makes it just a bit worse. Sex with a crazy person, who is in the middle of a psychotic break, is really not okay that's why it's illegal. While I realize this is just a story, when you include things that might upset readers like this, you should have the common courtesy to warn people with trigger warnings such as "Trigger: Dubious Consent"
Also, Spike has been feeling pretty Gary Stu-ish in this, with nopony ever having a problem with him, apparently every mare in existence wanting to jump his bones, constantly being the perfect casanova and best lover in Equestria, now we add his dick cures insanity ... If this wasn't strictly stated to be a non-canon omake I'd just cut my losses and stop reading here.
While this is non-canon, I could see how this could fit in. I bet Screw's sister would appreciate Spike's help in Screw's sanity.
If you aren't catching on, I mean the sister could be part of the jury. Anyone who would restore a family members' mind would definitely get some gratitude.
I care what any of you guys said. But Spike is fucking boss! To fuck someone to sanity is as badass as you can get. Not to mention I kind of hoping for spike getting an 'pet'. (Don't judge me.) But this was also good!
Okay I submit, that was a good chapter.
Loved this chapter heck of funny with Spike.
3588459 I take it you liked it?
Apparently the saying 'Never stick your dick in crazy' doesn't apply for spike.
3588592 Glad you liked them.
Nice job on the first clop due. And the last line killed me. Though this does bring up some ideas for some ScrewballXSpike shipping.
I know it isn't part of the canon, but it could be... Spike's such a good guy he helped a crazy mare back to sanity (they don't have to say how exactly)
Well, Screw Loose is in fact a cute mare.
Nice chapter even if it isn't canon with the story but kinda weirded me out. Definitely looking forward to the next chapters, especially Gilda.
oh that was gold!
That was so cute, maybe Spike should become a therapist?... Maybe not.
3589068 You got the reference!
3589014 Sorry about that.
Spike is such a nice guy.
Loved it.
Hehe, screwed into sanity. First time for everything.
My only response to this chapter is "Damn right!"
Never seen that match before but sweet
Non-canon=She's still craycray :(
3590674 not 'hearing', 'herring'... as in
Maybe it can be made canon? Have spike visit after the trial? She would be the only one he can go back to for fear that he could get in trouble for tampering with the jurors.
Just a thought.
Also adequate supplement for the wait between chapters. I look forward to the rest.
That last line sold it for me, ha!
I like the idea but the clop could of been more detailed.
Dude now that's what I call being a boss!
Screw Loose should temporarily be called Screw Tight now, if anything. I believe that is the first time that I have actually seen a story where someone has been literally screwed straight.
At this point, I hope it's permananent!! Spike, you stud, you!
i would like it to be canon to the story to be used for later
Good chapter,bark!
“Did I just screw somepony into sanity?”
If he could sell that abillity, he'd make millions.
That was 100% original gold! Awesome job with that whole chapter, and Spike saying Twilight's name in his sleep while pitching a tent? It was bound to happen sooner or later.
Well I guess we all know what this means: Spike got the "Magic Sticks"
lol the end is GOLD
Yes! I really enjoyed this one and the Trixie one the most! Idk why, but I do!
I cannot WAIT for the Gilda chapter.
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Curse you for getting my hopes up of Cup Cake in tights
3588481 LOVED IT……Also there was a reference in here somewhere, nt sure where or what , but my gut's telling there is.
Aslo
hahaha
3737280 Thanks Also the reference was from Monty Python and the Holy Grail.
3589316 That's because she was all out of herring.
he should be proud of him self he brought her back into sanity
This was a great chapter i was laughing as well as found it really enjoyable. I would love to see you write a story about Spike x Screw Loose as well. People (including myself) would love to see Spike taking care of the "Dog" Mare and then her switching between dog and pony. It would be a hit lol. Anyway keep up the great work. Can't wait for your next update.
3842946 Yea but i think he broke the nurse for every other stallion lol.
3843430 In that case, then you'll probably be interested in a new fic that recently came out, "Luv Sic".
it would be awesome if all of the jury plus "the mare 6" would get knocked up & at the trial still be that he is "innocent", that would ROCK!!
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What a fun chapter! Why the hell is everyone praising the last line, though? We were all thinking "he fucked her sane" and then you had to go and deprive us of the opportunity to say it in the comments. If you ask me, Screwy's bark following, "Y-You can SPEAK!?" was the winning zinger.
Good
That was ... pretty skeevy. The fact that you obviously realize that, from what you stated in the Author's Note, makes it just a bit worse. Sex with a crazy person, who is in the middle of a psychotic break, is really not okay that's why it's illegal. While I realize this is just a story, when you include things that might upset readers like this, you should have the common courtesy to warn people with trigger warnings such as "Trigger: Dubious Consent"
Also, Spike has been feeling pretty Gary Stu-ish in this, with nopony ever having a problem with him, apparently every mare in existence wanting to jump his bones, constantly being the perfect casanova and best lover in Equestria, now we add his dick cures insanity ... If this wasn't strictly stated to be a non-canon omake I'd just cut my losses and stop reading here.
While this is non-canon, I could see how this could fit in. I bet Screw's sister would appreciate Spike's help in Screw's sanity.
If you aren't catching on, I mean the sister could be part of the jury. Anyone who would restore a family members' mind would definitely get some gratitude.
I care what any of you guys said. But Spike is fucking boss! To fuck someone to sanity is as badass as you can get.
Not to mention I kind of hoping for spike getting an 'pet'. (Don't judge me.) But this was also good!