It's finally Pinkie Pie and Discord's big day.
But what happens when Princess Celestia wants revenge on the two and becomes jealous of Pinkie Pie for marrying Discord?
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I'm... not quite sure how to peg this story. Celestia and Discord are so completely out of character that they might as well be named Character A and Character B, not to mention the irrationality of the ship. I'm willing to accept any shipping pair as long as a reasonable story comes before it, but none exist here.
You write well enough, but I would recommend slowing down and spending more time detailing your scenes.
Deserving of an Alternate Universe tag if you ask me.
It's like...anti-Celesitra/Equestria/ propaganda.
No, reading the ending again. It's like Twilight...expect with ponies and the wedding objected.
Hope for more
Well, this fic would be to my interests... IF IT WAS LONGER.
chapters only a few hundred words long, bleh.
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
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Thanks for telling me this. I really appreciate the advice. By the way, I've never seen Twilight and I don't plan on it.
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So sorry about that!
I was trying to make Discord nicer.
Thank you, I will try to slow down and write a bit better.
I already added the Alternate Universe tag.
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Thanks! I'll try to write more!
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I know. I'll try to make it longer.
273896 Try and keep it in mind that characters should be in character unless...
Ha ha, I see what you are doing now ;).
hmmmm not bad
really nice, hope to see more soon
What could go wrong? thats what i would like to know
Faved! What could even go wrong with this!
This was a great fanfiction. Many short fics aren't too good, but you pulled it off great.
One thing though, during chapter 2 you dipped into first person for a while.
Anyway, good job!