• Member Since 3rd Feb, 2013
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Floo_Ter_Shai


Sup? I think I can write--let know if you think the same!

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I’m a griffon of business. I get the job done, and what I do, I do well. “That’s great,” you’re probably saying to yourself. Yeah, I can’t blame you. It doesn’t exactly sound special, does it? Well, that alone obviously isn’t. What is, though, is the fact that I don’t work at a desk. In fact, I’m as far away from one of those as I can get, thank Celestia. No, I’m a thief, and a professional one at that. I make my living in Phillydelphia’s seedy underbelly, the bad side of one of the most unforgiving cities in Equestria. The sort of place a business like mine can thrive.

But things are changing. The stakes are growing. The business is booming, and all thanks to my latest client, but there’s one problem. This group plays for keeps. They’re faceless, anonymous, and they’ve crossed the line. What they’ve done has to be repaid. It’s a matter of honor.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 14 )

Amazing! simply amazing writing:raritystarry:

This stuff is great why so little views? I wish i could write that well...

3418048 Thanks, I really appreciate the feedback! :twilightblush:

Comment posted by Floo_Ter_Shai deleted Nov 1st, 2013

... My God... did i just read a novel?

okay uh i guess i like this work... i guess? probably enough to make me fave this and see what happens next :rainbowkiss:
all i'll say is that i sometimes feel that too many details are being given. no other comment. This fic doesn't seem to be intended for a casual read anyway, i'm just worried that not many people will take interest to this

That's it. keep it up.

Wow it's great. But i'm pretty sure iamthemithras has a point though, still as far as things go for me I'm a happy pony:pinkiesmile:

Hmm, bravo bravo, I've been waiting for this my man and as usual I'm impressed.:pinkiesmile:

Keep up the great work

:rainbowderp: Holy hell. I'm happy and a little bit surprised this story is still going on

Will read new chapter later :scootangel:

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