Over the past few weeks Rainbow Dash has been experienceing weird dreams,and horrible voices in her head. She never thought it was anything serious so she just shook it off but when she takes her friends to explore a cave the voices get much worst...
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For some reason I keep thinking of the creatures from metro last light. The way the monster fight is almost mirror to them.
That is an incredibly degrading concept. There had damn well better be a pony season, griffon season, zebra season, donkey season, and mule season as well.
Fuck you, Rainbow Dash. That clinches it. Everything she suffers is acceptable, and goes a long way in making up for the shitty way she treats the most friendliest, most generous part of their group. That chill she felt right after thinking such a cold, dismissive thought seems very appropriate, as does the fact that she was the one responsible for killing four of her friends and died with that knowledge. You ask for constructive criticism, but it looks to me like all you need is more experience and a lot of professionally-distributed reading material to learn from. Besides, the shameless Spike abuse leaves me disinclined to offer anything at all that would improve this.
Dash: "Dragon season!"
Spike: "Pony season!"
Dash: "Dragon season!"
Spike: "Pony season!"
Dash: "Dragon season!"
Spike: "Dragon season!"
Dash: "Pony season!"
Spike: "Dragon season!"
Dash: "Pony season, FIRE!"
*Dash gets her head blown off*
Honestly, I like it! Sure there were many typos and grammar errors but the plot was great. Especially the twist at the end.
3216577 *Spike gets his head blown off* is actually so much better, you Dash-hating scumbag. Fuck you.
3218507 "Dash-hating scumbag"?
How could anyone possibly hate Rainbow Dash? Half of this biased fanbase consists of Spike-hating scumbags. 
3223794 Well yeah. I was commenting on the author's ridiculous fanon concept of Rainbow Dash. Fourth wall and all that.
What? The deaths were supposed to be a dream, not reality. Then RB would've became a demon. Damnit author you screwed up. And also in multiple places in the story you say "worst" it's supposed to be "worse"