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Prisoner 24601


sorry, but i don't do backstory. I'm just experienced, and this is my first time submitting it to the public.

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Prince Blueblood is the Son of the Princess, and known womanizer and snob. But when he disappoints his mother one too many times, he is disgraced and banished from Canterlot. When he finds himself in the wilderness without his own money, he doesn't know how to survive. The he comes across paradise. He finds field, endless with free apples. He pigs out on them, not only surviving, but thriving. That is, until, one of the farmers of the orchard notices apples missing form the trees, and tries to find the culprit. It doesn't take long, and soon he comes face to face with the depressed Prince.

But can he find comfort in this farmer?

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 3 )

As much as I like positive blueblood fics and giving him some romance,there feels like a lot is wrong with this.:twilightoops:
1.Why are they calling him Elenore? Doesn't seem like a name for the MLPverse nor is it unisex.
2.Along with the wonderbolts,they do have a military even if they don't condone wars so their kinda hypocrites here.
3.He said he wanted to fund it not use it for starting a war so why did they get angry at him?
4.They kicked him out for really no reason so I can't see why he'd feel any hatred for himself to think those things on any level let alone enough to want to commit suicide.
5.If this is an alternate world or something to condone the princesses behavior then there needs to be tags.

In all honesty this could be very good. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:
Just work on a few things.
Cant wait for the next chapter. :raritywink:

Whoa, this seems interesting... Never really liked Blueblood fics, but you write him well. :rainbowkiss:

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