• Member Since 20th Jul, 2012
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When you're waking up without your gear in strange wildlands; the last thing you'd want to do is panic.

So what do you do instead? You get to your damn feet and start looking for a way back to civilization.

Rated Teen for some harsh language.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 26 )

Well that was interesting and a lot better written than I thought it would be.

Huh, so...
Nope, i'm lost, or not something something i'm tired.

3201386>>3200870

I'm glad you took your time to read it. I appreciate it. :twilightsmile:

3202240 no worries...and this profile picture i have took WAY to long to get properly sized..and its STIOLL off.......

when i read Reminds me of Ol’ Greg i thought of farm4.staticflickr.com/3341/3425712168_9d00d195fd.jpg

Woo minotaur disguise! This can't possibly backfire!

3201386
Bah!
Here you are again!
It's like I'm reading everything you are!
Weird...

Alloy's new name is oOooOOOo

3256230 I dont roll that way my friend.....also i guess when either one of us sees the other reading a story we can more or less gauge if the story is good :D

majority of the stuff you liked i like and i think vice versa :P

but yeah we both see each other a LOT on here lately ._. (even if i dont say anything too you i see you..) also thanks for commenting to me i forgot about this story..

^epic song :D

also...do you like my new profile picture or was my older one better?(this one is properly sized....i couldnt get my old one proper -__- )

aaaannnddd im rambling on again.. :facehoof:

~Nightmare

Hmmmm i only have two guys im editing for....i would be willing to help you OP :D

(sooo what do you say? you just have to give me a schedule so i can make due with school being a bitch...)

*waves at jjames*

~nightmare

3257817
Hi there, yeah if you feel like it, I will gladly send my future chapters your way. I think we are in different timezones however, so I can't give you any kind of schedule to be honest. How about I link you to the google docs, when I feel like I'm done with the next chapter?

Also, thank you for not forgetting my story. :pinkiesmile:

3257878 You're updating your story slower than my friend Six Tales, who is at the hospital and have been there for two weeks or so.

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I'm not sure how I should respond to that. From what you say, I get the impression that this friend of yours have a lot more time on his hands, than I do.

Also, the story's been out since the 14th with weekly updates, so you'll have to forgive me when I don't understand what you're getting at. I can only spare 1-2 hours a day for this.

If you're merely impatient, then I assure you, next chapter has already been started. :pinkiesmile:

3261229 Six Tales got free time?
Oh god my sides! That guy spares himself like, twenty minutes a day at the computer!

I personally like what you've been doing with the story so far. I'm sorry about your cold, but perhaps the lack of likes is due to the speed of the update? Or perhaps that we haven't seen a single character of the main cast of MLP:FIM? I look forward to the next chapter.

ISA

Wow! How hard did he tap him?! I've been kicked by smaller horses and they've only left me limping or with a large bruise! And this is a small pony we are talking about!
Earth pony magic?

3317540
This story looks like it is set around the founding of Equestria.
Platinum is one of the three ponies that founded Equestria.

3318068 Hmn...I must not have noticed that. It's been a while since I've read this, and most minor information as well as a potential mention of Princess Platinum would have escaped my notice and memory. I thank you for you comment, and bid you a swell night.

3318077
I could be wrong though because Pure Platinum is a stallion. *Shrug*

3318083 So it could be the present Equestria...or like the 1980's to America with Grey-film.

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Bah! So confusing! We need more definite proof of time!

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He jabbed Vess in frustration. Alloy's a smith, so he basically keeps himself fit due to work, and yes, earth pony strength and endurance does indeed play a big roll here.

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Without trying to spoil too much of the story, I just want to point out that it isn't necessarily set in canon Equestria. The story does point out a possible timeline however, but how you want to interpret it is up to you.

If Pure Platinum has ties to Princess Platinum...well, I'll let that question remain unanswered at the moment.

Thank you both for commenting, and thank you for your kind words. I've come up with the ideas for the next chapter, and this time I'll try finishing it during the weekend. :pinkiesmile:

3319093 Looking forward to it. By the by, nice avatar pic.

ISA ...

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