Hey, I probably won't make this a regular thing. I may write a chapter every now and then but don't expect many big updates unless I state them beforehand.
As the last Big Daddy left in all of Rapture, loneliness had become a constant companion of mine. No memories, no voice, not even a face that I could call my own. I thought it would be like this for my entire existence in Rapture... At least, until
Rarity hears a rumor from Pinkie Pie about your less-than-modest endowment, and feels a little insecure. The Lady's overreaction on your date-night leads to rather unexpected, yet pleasureful concequences for the would-be dom.
Rarity and Spike head north. Their mission? Find and retrieve the plans for a weapon that could turn the tide of a once-hopeless war. It seems like a romantic getaway in the snowy mountains. But nothing could be farther from the truth...
As a military advisor in Canterlot, you learn of the mysterious quarantine of Ponyville. Thinking only of Rarity, your fiance, you rush to her rescue. However, the mare you find is far different than the one you remember. What is the limit of love?
No hacker had ever cracked DiamondTech's security. Fluttershy settled in to her cubicle office chair. Her program was running. All she had to do was pretend to be a corporate drone for one eight-hour shift.
So after reading it... I will reiterate that this normally is not my cup of tea. That being said... Dammit Aku, you've got me hooked. I'll be a regular reader of this, for sure.
i await for more, however there were a few parts i was lost at
Not at the pitiful little bowling alley on the edges of town, that is – no, she’d pooled her resources and invested wisely, working for months on end to quietly make her very own little personal secret chamber.
such as here i thought the scene changed not that she was picturing it in her head
and here
Just before she left, though, Dave tapped her on the shoulder.
where is this? i'm assuming in either a back exit area or was it by the front door? i don't know where
What kind of freak meets in a graveyard? At midnight?
okay are they meeting in the graveyard among the tome stones or at the entrance to it? graveyards are huge and dark soooo where are they?
these were really the only spots i found to be confusing, a little more scene creation would help a lot, such as bowling alleys come in all kinds, is it small is it big, is it connected to an arcade, things like that would help greatly even if it's a once time place she goes to
I'm going to give this a read. I read the description and it's normally not my cup of tea, but because it's you... I'll delve a bit further.
sounds good
So after reading it... I will reiterate that this normally is not my cup of tea. That being said... Dammit Aku, you've got me hooked. I'll be a regular reader of this, for sure.
I will enjoy this story very much.
please do continue
3199095 now im gonna have to read this because of your icon
i await for more, however there were a few parts i was lost at
such as here i thought the scene changed not that she was picturing it in her head
and here
where is this? i'm assuming in either a back exit area or was it by the front door? i don't know where
okay are they meeting in the graveyard among the tome stones or at the entrance to it? graveyards are huge and dark soooo where are they?
these were really the only spots i found to be confusing, a little more scene creation would help a lot, such as bowling alleys come in all kinds, is it small is it big, is it connected to an arcade, things like that would help greatly even if it's a once time place she goes to
Please continue!
Please, please, please continue this as soon as possible!
This is going to be very interesting. I would love to see what happens next.
Why are there so many dislikes?! I love this!
Please continue! I definitely want to see where this is going!
we keep hoping the next chapter please hurry
Continue, continue, continue, Luna demands that you continue. DO IT.
Continue damn it!
and spent a year and no other chapter
So is this thing ever going to continue?
Why do you make such awesome story ideas and NOT finish them????