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TotallyNotFurry


Hey, I probably won't make this a regular thing. I may write a chapter every now and then but don't expect many big updates unless I state them beforehand.

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I'm going to give this a read. I read the description and it's normally not my cup of tea, but because it's you... I'll delve a bit further.

So after reading it... I will reiterate that this normally is not my cup of tea. That being said... Dammit Aku, you've got me hooked. I'll be a regular reader of this, for sure.

I will enjoy this story very much.:ajbemused:

please do continue

3199095 now im gonna have to read this because of your icon :heart:

i await for more, however there were a few parts i was lost at

Not at the pitiful little bowling alley on the edges of town, that is – no, she’d pooled her resources and invested wisely, working for months on end to quietly make her very own little personal secret chamber.

such as here i thought the scene changed not that she was picturing it in her head

and here

Just before she left, though, Dave tapped her on the shoulder.

where is this? i'm assuming in either a back exit area or was it by the front door? i don't know where

What kind of freak meets in a graveyard?
At midnight?

okay are they meeting in the graveyard among the tome stones or at the entrance to it? graveyards are huge and dark soooo where are they?

these were really the only spots i found to be confusing, a little more scene creation would help a lot, such as bowling alleys come in all kinds, is it small is it big, is it connected to an arcade, things like that would help greatly even if it's a once time place she goes to

Please, please, please continue this as soon as possible!

This is going to be very interesting. I would love to see what happens next.

Why are there so many dislikes?! I love this!
Please continue! I definitely want to see where this is going!

we keep hoping the next chapter please hurry:pinkiesad2::eeyup::duck:

Continue, continue, continue, Luna demands that you continue. DO IT.

Continue damn it!

and spent a year and no other chapter :raritydespair::twilightangry2::moustache:

Comment posted by TotallyNotFurry deleted Sep 1st, 2014

So is this thing ever going to continue?

Why do you make such awesome story ideas and NOT finish them????

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