The Equestrian Navy had always protected those who ventured onto the deep, but when it came to fighting, they were woefully unprepared. With the loss of so many of the EN ships, and the new found enemy of the Changelings, Princess Celestia initiated the Royal Armed Forces Act, part of which called for a massive build-up of the navy from one of wood and canvas to that of a steel and steam. This is the story of the Schornhorse, the First True Battleship of the Royal Equestrian Navy.
Interesting start, not often do we get a fic about the ERN, definitively not often do we see them head into the Age of Steam. There is one thing I don't like, the inclusion of humans, sorry but that irks me to no end since it makes the ponies look like that they cannot progress or create on their own. Also... take the route less traveled, no Air Force, give the airships to the Navy.
Very interesting concept you have going here. Tracking and will PM you with a little something.
Here is a bit for you to play when you hit the Astrix in Chapter Two. If you don't see this till after it, well go back and read it again! It helps you to see what Storm sees. (Pun intended)
uh you could have at least mentioned my name little bro
oohh this appeals to my interests!
you have my support. This could go places...
of all the things that could happen this is the worst possible thing well not really
love you stormy
It's fjord.
Now you've got me wanting to see the Yamato in Equestria. That bad boy had some serious firepower.
Oh boy here we go... Lets get it on!
3220284 We talking ocean Yamato or space Yamato?
Cause someone's writing a fic about the latter
3258166 I'm talking about the one with nine 18' inch guns, twenty five centimetre thick deck armour, and took twelve torpedoes and seven bombs to sink.
upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/4/45/Yamato_Trial_1941.jpg
Thats 71,659 tons of total kick flank!
Scharnhorst was pretty good too but...well...Its the Yamato!
3259458 Well...Space Battleship Yamato is pretty much the sunken WW2 Yamato rebuilt and modified for space travel/combat
Adventure:ok Alternate Universe: ok Human: isn't the human tag for when there is a actual human running around in the story ? Not only ~3 slight reference about them!
PS. I'm disappointed there's no Human's in the story when there is a human tag. you
Small complaint the ship's name is spelled wrong, it's Scharnhorst (Scharnhorse in this case)
I really like this and Think it will go somewhere I cant wait for what will happen next
Well the idea was to make a pony based warship, one that is their own and Schornhorse is a true pony based warship. She might look like a lot of things, but she is what she is. no misspelling, and no copying.
Cool! As a lover of ships, and steel, and battle, it does my heart good to see a story about a steel battleship. Alls I gotta say is...the Schornhorse is HUGE!
thanks for the recognition, Storm
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Welcome, Mate!
3425758gentalmen it is good to see you
Come, cheer up, my lads, 'tis to glory we steer,
To add something more to this wonderful year;
To honour we call you, as freemen not slaves,
For who are so free as the sons of the waves?
Chorus:
Heart of oak are our ships, jolly tars are our men,
We always are ready; steady, boys, steady!
We'll fight and we'll conquer again and again.
We ne'er see our foes but we wish them to stay,
They never see us but they wish us away;
If they run, why we follow, and run them ashore,
For if they won't fight us, what can we do more?
(Chorus)
They say they'll invade us these terrible foe,
They frighten our women, our children, our beaus,
But if should their flat bottoms, in darkness set oar,
Still Britons they'll find to receive them on shore.
(Chorus X2)
Britannia triumphant her ships rule the seas,
Her watch word is justice her password is free,
So come cheer up my lad, with one heart let us sing,
Our soldiers, our sailors, our statesmen, our queen.
The Royal Navy March Past. Sing it loud lads, sing it loud.
Scharnhorst class
Class : Scharnhorst, Gneisenau. Launched 1936
Dimensions : Length - 235m/770ft 8in
Beam - 30m/98ft
Draught - 8m/27ft
Displacement : 35,400 tonnes/34,841 tons
Armament : Main - 9 X 280mm/11in guns
Secondary - 12 X 150mm/6in, 14 X 105mm/4.13in, 16 X 37mm/1.46in,
and 8 X 20mm/0.79in guns
Machinery : 12 boilers, 3 shafts
123,041kW/165,000shp
Speed : 32 knots
Complement : 1,669 men
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Yamato class
Class : Yamato, Mushasi, Shinano. Launched 1940-4
Dimensions : Length - 256m/839ft 9in
Beam - 37m/121ft
Draught - 10.5m/34ft
Displacement : 63,315 tonnes/62,315 tons
Armament : Main - 9 X 455mm/18in guns
Secondary - 12 X 155mm/6.1in, 12 X 125mm/5in, and 24 X 25mm/1.in guns
Machinery : 12 boilers, 4 shafts
111,855kW/150,000shp
Speed : 27 knots
Complement : 2,500 men
3259458 Days of battleships has passed, now it's the age of aviation
Well, those battle scenes sure gave me some tingles... Thumps up!
Moar please
Do you mean open fire? Also, capitalization, should be feeling, not Feeling, while Royal Air force should be Royal Air Force.
Use exclamation marks instead?
Capitalize Mesh. Add 'are' between what and the.
Great story idea! Bit rushed in the telling, but still got some good details in. The possible aliens reference in the end..... please don't. The movie Battleship was not very good for a reason.
Oh how true this is...we really masters of combat, no matter how hard people try to deny it. I commend you on adding this sad truth about humanity.
Soooo....when is the Hood gonna get sunk. Can't wait for that Bismarck to just start coming around in the sequel.
So Where's Luna? I feel like given that the Moon controls the tides, The Equestrian Navy would fall in her sphere of influence?
okay at first I thought her name was Crystal Meth..
The Schornhorse is larger and heavier than any other battleship in human history (even larger than the last planned American one). The H-class was never built too, so I have no idea how this was passed, considering that the story description implied they just transitioned to metal ships.
Edit: Goddamn this looks like a Kaiserreich naval arms race situation
Why would they make such a large ship with such a small armament? 380s, even twelve of them, are very small for a ship of that size.