I've survived The Princess Promenade. Multiple times. Beat that.
Rarity was just trying to do Rainbow's mane. Promise. But when those hairless THINGS showed up, she ran, leaving Rainbow tied to the chair with those creatures surrounding her. Now Twilight must go through the mirror once again, to save her friend. And helping her rescue Rainbow Dash is... Rainbow Dash. Humanoid Rainbow Dash. See what happens when human and pony meet for the first time... and whether Rainbow makes it out alive.
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MOAR
I find Pinkie breaking the fourth wall in such blatant fashion to be overdone and tiresome. I am having trouble deciding if I like this story or not, as the narrative hasn't progressed far enough for me to asses it. I'm also unsure on how I feel about each scene being its own chapter, while there's nothing wrong with doing it like that, it does go contrary to convention. I'll have to keep an eye on this story.
3171911 Thanks!
3171971 I'm working on it. Thanks for your support!
Question: should I do more than one story at a time or keep working on this one? Please respond with your answer. Thx!
More then one story definitely.
Also... you do need to double space your paragraphs. Please.
3174662 Ok I'll do that. Both of those things actually. Thank you for telling me.
3174668 Ok I double-spaced it and my second story, which is awaiting approval as I type. Thx for telling me, and I hope u will let me know if anything else is wrong.
moar kidnapping! I wanna see what happens.... MUUUAAAHAHHAHAHAHAHAAA!
3174626More than one ;-)
Make the next ones funny please!
In other news, let's see how the rest of this story will go.
3183639 Deal!
3176380 After this one I'm going to leave a cliffhanger signaling the next kidnapping... can you guess who it is?
Muah ha ha ha ha!!!
3178076 I'll sure try!
lol, funny chapter. Short, but funny. ;)
3200742 I don't mean to make them short, they just turn out that way. I try not to get into too unnecessary details.
3200752Cool get it.
Well, now we know RD is in a mess, now let's see what Twilight's up to!
Yep, I read it. Now we wait.
3200991 Not for long!
And then Twilight does this:
FUCKING ANIMAL ABUSE
I hate our species...
3204790 Exactly. You're not supposed to like him. Though, even to the author, this guy is PHYCHO!
Hhhmmmm....
3210798 Yeah, Ch. 10 is just planning. It gets better.
now thats gonna leave a mark is what i would say but right now.....
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE BE OKAY DASH FOR THE LOVE OF GOD BE ALRIGHT WHY DID THIS HAVE TO HAPPEN
3215843 Don't worry, she's fine. Just a few more broken bones, no biggie!
Dun Dun Dun!!!
Don't worry, she's just...sleeping!
Yeah...sleeping.
3216622 Hehe!
Well, only two things can save Rainbow now. Discord, or Friendship.
3220192 Most likely Friendship.
YAY!!!!! you're like cranking out one chapter every day that AWESOME!
story's really god too can't wait for next chapter!
3220203 Well, I have a lot of free time!
i guess its ok.
just kidding!
its AWESOME!!!!
Welp, we all know what happened...
PARADOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO-
3221221 What does PARADOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO- mean?
U asked for constructive criticism., you'll get it.
For starters, make the chapters longer.. about a thousand words or more per chapter. Also, Applejack does not have a capital "J" in it. You should have started the story with what really happens with RD, not to mention how much more description u need about the " hairless creatures". That's all I have to say...
...moar please
Bite in the boootayyyy!!!!!
3225157 Yea, sorry they're so short, I don't want to get into boring details, and I try to make up for it by doing a large story.
I will try to do all that on my next story. 
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3224766
As far as you're concerned, absolutely nothing.
Well, in my completely novice opinion, it seems Miss Dash is in what I call an epiphanic coma.
3225954
I accidentally "finished" it without doing the final Discord scene!
If you had already read my latest chapter, please know now that it is NOT over and we need to have a chat with Discord first.
Almost done!
thx your awesome keep up the good work love your stories mean it i swear
you can do it i know you can