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That_G3_Obsessive


I've survived The Princess Promenade. Multiple times. Beat that.

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Twilight Sparkle is obsessed with books. She has no time for friends, even on Hearth's Warming Eve.

But then, one Hearth's Warming, she gets a strange warning from the ghost of Spike, a partner believed to be dead seven years. He warns her that three spirits are coming to save her from a horrible fate after death.

Will she learn the true meaning of Hearth's Warming Eve before it's too late?

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Comments ( 6 )

Looks good, can't wait to read!

I like how you made them all fit so well into their characters. Especially DT and SS and Ignorance and Want.

It was kind of rushed. To me it looks like Twilight was scared of the spirits, and then changed out of fear, not love and compassion. It lacks.... feelings from her. It was really nice tho.

3678485 I hope I didn't do Twilight too much like Scrooge... :applejackunsure:

God I am so lazy reading this in 2014! This was really good but I have to wonder, who is the ghost of Christmas Future? Zecora? Also... THERE WAS NO GOD BLESS US EVERYONE from Tiny Ti- I mean Applebloom!! Other than that..... OMG THIS WAS SO ADORABLE! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2:

3720144 Yes there was a "Celestia bless us all!"

Twilight was more than loyal to her word. To Apple Bloom, who did not die, she was a second sister. And the filly
told the tale over and over and over again, ending it with:
"And may Celestia bless us all!"

And Future was just a shadow pony. I was thinking of making it Luna in disguise with her bursting out yelling "Surprise!" But then I saw the shadow pony at the end of Castle-Mania and decided to go with that.

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